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Challenge Entry: "Lawn"

May 23, 2013 19:07

Title: Agannûlo ( Read more... )

character: isildur, challenge: grass: lawn, author: necronomijon

Comments 5

someplacetobe May 23 2013, 18:24:56 UTC

I like the imagery in this: the rainbows, the fountain, the shadow.

engarian May 23 2013, 20:04:19 UTC

Nice to have a bit of a rest with the boys able to play for a while. I liked your imagery.

- Erulisse (one L)

curiouswombat May 23 2013, 20:05:55 UTC

That is both very beautiful, and sad.

cairistiona7 May 23 2013, 20:26:40 UTC

Hard times leave indelible marks, even on kings. Perhaps especially on kings. Another excellent installment.

ysilme July 14 2013, 11:15:37 UTC

And now the circle closes, Isildur now being the father. I like how you show in so few words how the danger that lies behind he peace never really goes away.