Hairdressing Challenge, Curl - His Greatest Mistake

Jun 08, 2011 07:10

Author: Azalaisdep
Title: His Greatest Mistake
Characters: Gandalf
Rating: G
Source: LoTR
Disclaimer: Middle-earth belongs to Tolkien and his heirs: I wander there for fun, not profit

His Greatest Mistake )

author: azalaisdep, character: gandalf, challenge: hairdressing: curl

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someplacetobe June 8 2011, 06:35:22 UTC
I could picture this as I read, due to the description which feels so very rich.

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azalaisdep June 8 2011, 11:55:30 UTC
Thank you! There aren't many words to conjure the atmosphere, so I'm delighted you found it effective :-)

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curiouswombat June 8 2011, 07:37:57 UTC
Good stuff. Perhaps Saruman's greatest mistake, once he had decided on his course, was to underestimate Gandalf, and Radagast, too.

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azalaisdep June 8 2011, 11:55:56 UTC
Ooh, there's a point. Maybe the title is more ambiguous than I thought! :-)

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lindahoyland June 8 2011, 10:13:35 UTC
You really made me feel for poor Gandalf's plight here. An excellent drabble.

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azalaisdep June 8 2011, 11:57:07 UTC
Thank you, Linda.

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engarian June 8 2011, 10:31:08 UTC
This is wonderfully evocative. Well done.

- Erulisse (one L)

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azalaisdep June 8 2011, 11:57:19 UTC
I'm glad you thought so!

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kortirion June 8 2011, 11:03:12 UTC
Ooooo *shivers* A combination of your well chosen words and a memory of PJ's visuals brings to mind a vivid impression of Gandalf's thoughts at that time.

Nicely done!

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azalaisdep June 8 2011, 11:58:12 UTC
Yes, I suspect I'm riffing off the PJ visuals too (which, having gone back to the book, are pretty canon-based at that point and very effective). Glad it made you shiver!

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