Snake!

Nov 28, 2010 22:09


Author: Jay of Lasgalen
Title: Snake!
Characters:  Estel and Elrohir
Rating: G
Source: LOTR
Disclaimer: Tolkien's; not mine

Summary:  Estel has a narrow escape.  Written for the 'Coil' challenge.

Snake! )

challenge: potter's wheel - coil, character: estel, character: elrohir, author: jay_of_lasgalen

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curiouswombat November 28 2010, 22:46:32 UTC
Probably a good thing that someone scared the snake!

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jay_of_lasgalen November 29 2010, 06:20:16 UTC
The snake was just minding its own business! It's gone off for a quiet snooze where it won't be poked at :)

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kortirion November 28 2010, 23:07:53 UTC
Ah yes - the child's response to the natural world: 'if in doubt... jab it with a stick!' ^_~

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jay_of_lasgalen November 29 2010, 06:21:07 UTC
In this case, a stick is better than his fingers ...

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clodia_metelli November 28 2010, 23:33:14 UTC
Oh dear, that child has a lot to learn before he can call himself a Ranger... and pity the nerves of those who'll have to teach him! Delightful, thank you!

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jay_of_lasgalen November 29 2010, 06:23:22 UTC
I think the twins keeping a watch on Estel is payback for all their youthful misadventures!

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clodia_metelli November 29 2010, 23:07:58 UTC
Thanks! It was made for me by gogollescent -- I'm sure she won't mind you ganking it, as long as you credit her.

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shirebound November 29 2010, 01:01:25 UTC
I suspect Estel will remember this event, with gratitude, during his life as a Ranger.

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jay_of_lasgalen November 29 2010, 06:24:32 UTC
Of course he will - and point out that he, not Elrohir, actually saw the snake!

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azalaisdep November 29 2010, 09:43:01 UTC
Hah, I love the image of IndignantToddler!Estel. Who will learn, as he grows up, only to poke with sharp pointy implements things/people that really need poking with sharp pointy implements...

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jay_of_lasgalen November 29 2010, 18:18:29 UTC
Yes - and that he should let sleeping snakes lie ...

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