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someplacetobe June 28 2014, 18:42:02 UTC
Grief feels the more likely reason why she died, for all of the other reason's 'sense'.

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hhimring July 1 2014, 21:41:48 UTC
As grief can fatally weaken a patient's constitution, the two explanations aren't really mutually exclusive.
But it's good that Gloredhel's grief comes through!

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kortirion June 28 2014, 23:23:13 UTC
*nods*

I barely remember my grandparents, but they died within a year of each other, and Mum always said Grandpa died of grief... though officially it was pneumonia.

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hhimring July 2 2014, 07:43:39 UTC
Yes, it seems to be the way grief can kill, quite often--by weakening the bereaved until something gets them, like pneumonia. Apparently pneumonia is often caused by bacteria that are harmless to a strong and healthy person...
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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curiouswombat June 29 2014, 15:13:46 UTC
And both the men and Beldis were right, in their different ways...

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hhimring July 2 2014, 07:50:09 UTC
Partly a matter of perspective, I think. The men observed the change in Gloredhel from a certain distance. Beldis, as a healer and a family member, had been fighting to keep her alive, step by step.
But I did want to hint, also, that the harsh living conditions after the loss of such a large number of able men wouldn't help either--I was also thinking of your Rohirrim family there!

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aliana1 June 30 2014, 02:12:18 UTC
I very much like the contrast presented in the last line; the men's assumption of women's susceptibility to heartbreak, and Beldis's practical insistence on concrete facts. I imagine that both theories could be correct. Well done!

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hhimring July 2 2014, 08:16:59 UTC
Thank you! Yes, I had both in mind: that perception of death from grief and heartbreak being a female thing (which I don't think is right) and the ways in which grief does kill (which are really quite unromantic, mostly).

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