[Shinee] Middlemen | #3

[tohoginka32]

“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?”

Jonghyun doesn’t answer, doesn’t move; just breathes in place. Minho appears beside Kibum, Taemin rushing passed them to get to the frightened recruit.

Jonghyun reaches out when he sees Taemin sinking to the ground next to Jinki to help him. “Taemin, don’t-“

“Shut up!” Kibum pushes the lips of the gun

Comments

[kaybee38]

OMG THAT was intense. Oh and Victoria is his sister? did I get that right? And what the hell did that guy do to Taemin? Really great writing though. I don't usually go for Keymin but this backstory is really good. My only suggestion? Rate this R.

[kaybee38]

Oh and I now have a new use for pineapple juice tyvm!

[tohoginka32]

Yeah, she is :)
MUST READ TO FIND OUT MORE
That is if this chapter didn't scare you off :(
The thing is I have read and watched way worse than this (non fanfics, like actual fiction novels) which is why I consider this to be baby gore or something. LOL
But I was kind of waiting for someone to mention the rating. So, yeah. Will change this by the next chapter. Coz things are going to get messy.
Glad you found the pineapple bit useful. Read that in cosmo once. IT WORKS. Just sayin' ;))))

Thank you ♥

[kaybee38]

Don't get me wrong I LOVED it. And yes ur right, some people have some wonky ratings up in here. Unnie's jus lookin' out for the kids..

-----> runs off to the store for pineapple juice before her man gets home

[intoxicatedbrat]

HOLY. OMG. O.O

Why are you so worried about losing readers bb? I bet there are a lot of closet sadists out there. Like me. X)
Gore is good, once in a while. I like it. Yea, I'm sadistic like that.

What Taemin did was hella nasty. I bet that dude deserved it though. But poor Taemin. ;__;

I TOTALLY WASN'T EXPECTING VICTORIA AND KIBUM TO BE RELATED.
Like wtfffff. Oh you got me real goooood. >:)

[tohoginka32]

BECAUSE THIS IS KIND OF BRUTAL AND OUT THERE AND JUST JUST JUST.
I'm glad you stuck with it though :)
And that some bits caught you off guard (particularly the one abt Vic)
Thank you ♥

[snazzyfranie]

LOVE THIS STORY. <3
and this chapter in particular.
TaeKey makes me happy. C:

I love dlearning about Kibum's history because I was so curious about it before in the previous chapters. Now I'm a little curious as to what happened to Taemin! D:
...wait now what's Minho's story? ._____.

SO MANY QUESTIONS.

Also I really liked the flow of this chapter. :0
I dont know I kept thinking about that when I was reading. xD

I can't wait for the next part!
You're an excellcent writer. <3

[tohoginka32]

THANK YOU SO MUCH

As for your question, be patient dear reader. Everything shall be covered. LOL. ALthough I know how frustrating this must be as I don't update as quickly as I want to :))

Thank you ♥

[life_not_knife]

omg just kndlkmfalsmdlaksm this has just become my favorite fanfic that I am reading at the moment and OMG! TaeKey !! Wahhh I LOVE you! that pairing isn't written enough... ooo and Oh EM GEE! I almost died when I found out Victoria is really Kibums sister like OMG! .... ahhhh.

I could go on and on and on but I have a 3,000word essay I should be writing [but i would rather read this :D] . Thanks BB, I am SOOO gonna Stalk this fic! [and you...in a totally non creepy kind of way] Can't wait for the next update. xxxxxxx

[tohoginka32]

TaeKey ♥♥♥
People need to appreciate this pairing more :D
Aww, proceed with your responsibilities fair reader. Thank you for rreading and commenting :)

[reverokameorih]

fucking loving this whole series.
i absurdly LOVE your TAEKEY you have no idea how much i love you for this.
it's just. i wish i could write everything i feel regarding this story so far but i'll attain to the main facts. i cannot wait for more jongyu moments. but more than that, i love it the other characters also have their own highlights and it pains me to see how taemin has changed, how everyone has changed. minho is such a sweetie ;A; a-and back to the taekey, omg, it's perfect. victoria too. i cannot even say what i feel towards her lol <3
gonna keep up with the updates from now on x)

[tohoginka32]

All the characters are pretty fucked up, I know ♥
Thank you so much :)
For reading and for commenting.