“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?”
Jonghyun doesn’t answer, doesn’t move; just breathes in place. Minho appears beside Kibum, Taemin rushing passed them to get to the frightened recruit.
Jonghyun reaches out when he sees Taemin sinking to the ground next to Jinki to help him. “Taemin, don’t-“
“Shut up!” Kibum pushes the lips of the gun
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but i just wanted to say that i'm reading this and enjoying every moment of it!
reading about kibum's past and how taemin became a part of the underground was really interesting and unexpected.
you are a great writer!
i can't wait to read mroe!
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Thank you for reading all the chapters and for commenting :)
<3
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so victoria is kibum's sister. now i see how he's always the 'special' one in the house.
and taemin scared me in this chapter. but poor kid...
you're really good at developing characters. it's so smooth and convincing.
looking forwards to more jinki/jonghyun in next chapter!
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And thanks for always commenting <3
And reading :)
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I...I....wow.
So that's how Minnie got in. I definitely wasn't expecting that. And holyshit!!!! It's his SISTER??!!!! *flails*
This chapter totally pantsed me. It was like whooosh shit's getting exposed! XD all these light bulbs were going on, and it was like *makes bright expression* ILLUMINATION.
oh and about the last part......Taemin. I have theories. Probably all wrong. But it's fun to speculate ;D
*loves*
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Most of the chapters are kind of gonna be like this onwards. I hope that's okay ^^
LOL. ILLUMINATION. That made me LOL for a good 30 secs
Your theories? They're probably right. Hehe. But don't speculate too much. I like surprising you guys :D
THANK YOUUUUUU<34567
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*FLAIL* not whateverthefuck I actually typed XD ahahhaha flail FAIL. *giggles*
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So yeah, this was awesome! And I loved how this part had so much taekey in it. ^^
Can't wait for more~
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I love this story so much~
The last part was kinda mind scarring since I had no idea that feat was possible. But it was good~
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Please read/watch/listen to happy things after this :D
Thank you ♥
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