[Shinee] Middlemen | #3

Nov 11, 2010 23:56

“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?”

Jonghyun doesn’t answer, doesn’t move; just breathes in place. Minho appears beside Kibum, Taemin rushing passed them to get to the frightened recruit.

Jonghyun reaches out when he sees Taemin sinking to the ground next to Jinki to help him. “Taemin, don’t-“

“Shut up!” Kibum pushes the lips of the gun ( Read more... )

shinee!, taekey!, jongyu!

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g_odalisque13 November 11 2010, 17:35:41 UTC
i've been a silent reader before (i'm sorry!)
but i just wanted to say that i'm reading this and enjoying every moment of it!
reading about kibum's past and how taemin became a part of the underground was really interesting and unexpected.
you are a great writer!
i can't wait to read mroe!

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tohoginka32 November 11 2010, 17:42:30 UTC
LOL That's okay.
Thank you for reading all the chapters and for commenting :)
<3

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jminorme November 11 2010, 17:51:03 UTC
the banner!! jjang!

so victoria is kibum's sister. now i see how he's always the 'special' one in the house.
and taemin scared me in this chapter. but poor kid...

you're really good at developing characters. it's so smooth and convincing.

looking forwards to more jinki/jonghyun in next chapter!

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tohoginka32 November 11 2010, 18:03:49 UTC
Thank you. I did put some effort into the banner :))))
And thanks for always commenting <3
And reading :)

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a_life_defiant November 11 2010, 17:51:31 UTC
O_O

I...I....wow.

So that's how Minnie got in. I definitely wasn't expecting that. And holyshit!!!! It's his SISTER??!!!! *flails*

This chapter totally pantsed me. It was like whooosh shit's getting exposed! XD all these light bulbs were going on, and it was like *makes bright expression* ILLUMINATION.

oh and about the last part......Taemin. I have theories. Probably all wrong. But it's fun to speculate ;D

*loves*

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tohoginka32 November 11 2010, 18:07:03 UTC
:DDDD
Most of the chapters are kind of gonna be like this onwards. I hope that's okay ^^
LOL. ILLUMINATION. That made me LOL for a good 30 secs
Your theories? They're probably right. Hehe. But don't speculate too much. I like surprising you guys :D

THANK YOUUUUUU<34567

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a_life_defiant November 11 2010, 19:37:05 UTC
*tells my brain to STFU* :D Ok, I shall patiently await the next pantsing-lightbulb-falil-worthy installment ^^



*FLAIL* not whateverthefuck I actually typed XD ahahhaha flail FAIL. *giggles*

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griluvisvip November 11 2010, 19:27:43 UTC
LOL I'm sorry, but I feel the need to point out that I am also in love with your avatar/icon thingy. It's so freaking cute~<3 XD sorry, that was really random XDD

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tommii_kaiko November 11 2010, 18:15:32 UTC
I am one of those who can't stand this type of movies, but for some reason I can read anything. :P
So yeah, this was awesome! And I loved how this part had so much taekey in it. ^^
Can't wait for more~

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tohoginka32 November 11 2010, 18:59:55 UTC
Thank you <3 I'll update as soon as I can

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soasian101 November 11 2010, 18:19:53 UTC
Yeaaah Taekey Yeaaaah~

I love this story so much~

The last part was kinda mind scarring since I had no idea that feat was possible. But it was good~

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tohoginka32 November 11 2010, 19:01:09 UTC
Sorry if I scarred you for life :(
Please read/watch/listen to happy things after this :D
Thank you ♥

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