[Shinee] Middlemen | #3
“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?”
Jonghyun doesn’t answer, doesn’t move; just breathes in place. Minho appears beside Kibum, Taemin rushing passed them to get to the frightened recruit.
Jonghyun reaches out when he sees Taemin sinking to the ground next to Jinki to help him. “Taemin, don’t-“
“Shut up!” Kibum pushes the lips of the gun ( Read more... )
Jonghyun doesn’t answer, doesn’t move; just breathes in place. Minho appears beside Kibum, Taemin rushing passed them to get to the frightened recruit.
Jonghyun reaches out when he sees Taemin sinking to the ground next to Jinki to help him. “Taemin, don’t-“
“Shut up!” Kibum pushes the lips of the gun ( Read more... )
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*sniff* I would like to thank...
XD I'm just kidding :P
But I re-read it, and I still love your writing ^W^
This wasn't me honey: the creativity was ALL YOU.
All I did was make grammar corrections XD
*blushes* Thank you for the compliment though ^^
Ok: Time to quote favorite parts (minus the smut: I can't quote the whole smut XD)
“She changed her name a long time ago.”
“From what?”
“Jeeyan.” Kibum clears his throat. “But no one calls her that anymore.”
“Why not?”
“Because.” Kibum looks up from his plate with every intention of ending the conversation. “It’s just like you said. No one stays the same forever.”
When I found out he was working for his sister, I flipped the fuck out!!!!
“Then I’m going.” Jonghyun’s statement makes all three boys exchange wide eyed stares ( ... )
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THANK YOU
GOOD GOD if it weren't for you readers would still be trying to understand my grammar (or lack thereof) :))
And you quoted!!!
And omg the smut ide.
I'm grateful that you got through it while still correcting it. LOL.
I'm also thankful that the backtracks didn't confuse you. I was also worried about that being a problem. Coz Kibum's memories just go back and back then boom back to the present LOL.
STAY IN MY LJ LIFE FOREVER PLEASE.
thanks again :)
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I couldn't leave your lj life if i tried to XD
I feel so lucky to be even mentioned in your message ^^
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but thank you for the spot! or i would've been on the second page by now LOL
and oh god this chapter...is amazing!
so victoria is key's sister that killed their parents. hmm...it explains how key said he grew up there. and am i correct to assume that the man that influenced victoria is also the big boss of Underground?
fyi, i cant really imagine taemin involved in xxx activities. he's just too innocent looking, i just cant see it kekeke. but hey, anything can happen in fictions. LOL
aww...no JongYu here. next chapter? oh and i was wondering if minho kinda likes jonghyun. coz i ship JongHo ^^
thanks again for the spot! and great chapter!
♥♥♥~
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I'm sorry. I didn't mean to disappoint :(
Jongyu shall be back shortly. You need not fret. I just have to introduce all of the characters so that you can get a better background as to why they are the way that they are. And so tht the following chapters will make sense :)
Anyway, thanks for reading and the comment <3
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Will try to update as soon as I can.
Again, thank you <3
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THIS IS SO GOOD.
I LOVE TAEKEY!
icannot wait for for more.
seriously so fucking good!
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