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To Em; February prompt number 21

Feb 20, 2007 16:12

Fuji/Yumiko - Things are not as they may seem.

Any !verse you wish to use. ;)

fic, prompts:prince of tennis, to:em, prompts:february07

Comments 4

fsop February 21 2007, 00:51:53 UTC

Syuusuke is twelve years old when he meets the love of his life, and Yumiko knows it well before he does. Because there are some things written deep within the cards that you can only pick out when you know someone that intimately. Up until now these insights have all been aimed at herself, and cause for dismay on the most part. She has not shared them with anyone. She does not think they will believe, anyway ( ... )

meruhen February 21 2007, 00:55:55 UTC

Poor Yumiko. :/ I feel so bad for her, with that last line, and there's such an air about the piece that is melancholic. Holding on to her brothers because she can't have kids herself. It's kind of twisted but it just fits so well.

Her showing Fuji things is definitely interesting! ;) I want more of this!

fsop February 21 2007, 07:38:07 UTC

I'm going to tweak some words I have repeated and things when I get home tonight, and post this on my journal :)

meruhen February 21 2007, 18:55:08 UTC

And add more, right? ;)