i didn't mean to begin the comment that way. what i wanted to say! was that this is so realistic and true to donghae :3 i can imagine these things going through his head because of all the instincts TEH BABEHZ bring out in him. so cute. it's fine that nothing happens between them, and i don't feel cheated out of a kiss or anything. it's really sweet, although the ending's kind of sad, but you know it was all a momentary daydream and nothing's supposed to happen. i liked <3
it was all a momentary daydream and nothing's supposed to happen
Exactly :D Urgh I'm glad it seemed true to him, I know I told you already but I don't know, I still find him difficult to write. Or maybe just that deciding to write him was difficult? What am I saying, I don't even know lol. He totally has this look on his face like "omg kids!!!!" whenever they're on a show with little kids though... I remember watching Star King or something with SJ and there was a kid on there and he looked so "8D LOVE ME LOVE ME"
I've always thought Hae would make an amazing dad, because it's obvious that he's a total family man, and from the age of like what, 19? 20? he was talking about how badly he wanted to be a father. So yes, I can totally see this happening, he does have a major soft spot for children. =D
The last paragraph had me misty-eyed. *sighs* Why is your writing so lovely, but carries with it just that bit of melancholy? I love this, I love you ♥
Aww, I'm glad you think it's believable... hard to do so with a pairing that doesn't actually exist ;) Haha, I'm sure Donghae wouldn't mind some babies~ thanks for reading and commenting!
Oh man, I know I read this ages ago, but a few months back I was remembering this and I just couldn't find it anywhere! I just went LJ stumbling and luckily came across this again! I still love it so much, in fact I was so inspired by this I wrote my own Donghae/Bom fic based on an idea that came after thinking about this again- of course it's not as good as yours :)
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i didn't mean to begin the comment that way. what i wanted to say! was that this is so realistic and true to donghae :3 i can imagine these things going through his head because of all the instincts TEH BABEHZ bring out in him. so cute. it's fine that nothing happens between them, and i don't feel cheated out of a kiss or anything. it's really sweet, although the ending's kind of sad, but you know it was all a momentary daydream and nothing's supposed to happen. i liked <3
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Exactly :D Urgh I'm glad it seemed true to him, I know I told you already but I don't know, I still find him difficult to write. Or maybe just that deciding to write him was difficult? What am I saying, I don't even know lol. He totally has this look on his face like "omg kids!!!!" whenever they're on a show with little kids though... I remember watching Star King or something with SJ and there was a kid on there and he looked so "8D LOVE ME LOVE ME"
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The last paragraph had me misty-eyed. *sighs* Why is your writing so lovely, but carries with it just that bit of melancholy? I love this, I love you ♥
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♥ melancholy is my best friend in writing 8)
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ill have babies with you
just <3 yet sad..
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