Instinct (Park Bom/Donghae)

Nov 06, 2009 20:45

Park Bom/Donghae (2NE1/Super Junior)
Very mild PG. Part II of a series of Backstage Encounters.


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genre: general, length: short (less than 1000), rating: pg, pairing: bom/donghae, fandom: super junior, fandom: 2ne1

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notablender November 7 2009, 07:19:24 UTC
THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF A ROMANCE MOVIE.

i didn't mean to begin the comment that way. what i wanted to say! was that this is so realistic and true to donghae :3 i can imagine these things going through his head because of all the instincts TEH BABEHZ bring out in him. so cute. it's fine that nothing happens between them, and i don't feel cheated out of a kiss or anything. it's really sweet, although the ending's kind of sad, but you know it was all a momentary daydream and nothing's supposed to happen. i liked <3

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todefinebeauty November 7 2009, 18:51:24 UTC
it was all a momentary daydream and nothing's supposed to happen

Exactly :D Urgh I'm glad it seemed true to him, I know I told you already but I don't know, I still find him difficult to write. Or maybe just that deciding to write him was difficult? What am I saying, I don't even know lol. He totally has this look on his face like "omg kids!!!!" whenever they're on a show with little kids though... I remember watching Star King or something with SJ and there was a kid on there and he looked so "8D LOVE ME LOVE ME"

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thundersquall November 7 2009, 08:41:38 UTC
I've always thought Hae would make an amazing dad, because it's obvious that he's a total family man, and from the age of like what, 19? 20? he was talking about how badly he wanted to be a father. So yes, I can totally see this happening, he does have a major soft spot for children. =D

The last paragraph had me misty-eyed. *sighs* Why is your writing so lovely, but carries with it just that bit of melancholy? I love this, I love you ♥

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todefinebeauty November 7 2009, 18:53:18 UTC
Children are definitely something that you can see have an obvious effect on him :) I'm glad this seems realistic!

♥ melancholy is my best friend in writing 8)

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baby_buggs November 8 2009, 01:24:29 UTC
adorableness....<3

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todefinebeauty November 8 2009, 02:39:12 UTC
:) thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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tees2mai November 8 2009, 10:35:09 UTC
i love this... its perfect and believable...and hae hae D: *hug tackles*
ill have babies with you

just <3 yet sad..

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todefinebeauty November 8 2009, 17:21:46 UTC
Aww, I'm glad you think it's believable... hard to do so with a pairing that doesn't actually exist ;) Haha, I'm sure Donghae wouldn't mind some babies~ thanks for reading and commenting!

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tees2mai December 22 2010, 19:09:24 UTC
Oh man, I know I read this ages ago, but a few months back I was remembering this and I just couldn't find it anywhere! I just went LJ stumbling and luckily came across this again! I still love it so much, in fact I was so inspired by this I wrote my own Donghae/Bom fic based on an idea that came after thinking about this again- of course it's not as good as yours :)

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todefinebeauty December 29 2010, 22:28:30 UTC
If you have a link to your fic, I'd love to take a look at it! I'm so happy to hear that this might have inspired you :)

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todefinebeauty November 8 2009, 17:23:46 UTC
Ahah, I was hoping it would! Thanks so much for the comment~ and I love your username and your icon 8D ♥

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