This is for feedback on how I'm doing with Roxie. Post away!

Background:Roxie, age fourteen-and-a-half, has rotated through an assortment of foster homes since the age of seven, when her single-parent mother was institutionalized for severe mental illness. The girl was, from a young age, quiet, intelligent, and very perceptive, even if she seemed to be lost in her own little world sometimes. This wasn't ( Read more... )