FIC

Apr 06, 2012 13:59

HI GUYS. So. UM. fic. Title from my favourite song ever by Phantom Planet: Geronimo

Title: make me blush
Author: A
Pairing: Niall/Liam/Zayn (Ziamall Malorayne or OTfucking3 as I like to call them), with heavy Ziam undertones
Rating: NC-17
Warning: um, first-time? PWP? Oh, also the only beta-ing this thing has is Toria OH and my High School bio teacher ( Read more... )

rating:nc-17, one direction, pairing:niall/liam/zayn

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shoreparty April 7 2012, 03:07:24 UTC
This is the best scenario EVER. Omg my brain exploded.

Come on, Nandos. Ha, you really should change your password. Choked.

it’s like a dam breaks and Zayn’s whatever for Liam pours forth. I'm a sucker for confused Ziam. Like they're the mature ones, they should be totally okay on their own but there's so much whatever playing in the air at some point they're just going to snap.

Niall knows, as he guesses he’s always known, that the writers of Ziam fanfic are fucking insane because no way Zayn would be rough with Liam. Ohhhh I knooooowww.

He doesn’t think they’ll be able to survive as a band if Liam doesn’t love Zayn back, Niall thinks in a rush, Zayn’s kissing Liam like if he stops now he’ll stop everything. I can just see his eyes bouncing between them translating everything in real time and the Ziam is so overwhelming it's like Niall's going to throw up toooo.

Niall forgets himself for a moment in looking at the expression on Zayn’s face: it’s vulnerable and open, and it’s good Liam’s eyes are closed because if he opened ( ... )

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tmk_fics April 8 2012, 06:48:53 UTC
oh my goodness this is the BEST COMMENT EVER especially since I am obsessed with your religion fic so it's like doubly the best?!?!?! I'm just so glad you managed to read through my ridiculous run-ons and inability to write porn and that you have the same Ziam feels oh my gosh I would say the reason this feels meta is because I literally just take what they give me in gifs and videos and WRITE IT DOWN because their feelings are already perfect and they need no editing and. Wow. Um, I love Ziam. Thank you again so much for reading!!! (p.s. Yes. Ziam buddies. YES.)

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shoreparty April 8 2012, 13:56:30 UTC
Omg you're so sweet! Yeah, I seriously love it. The sexytimes were great too; I'm still trying to get up the courage to try that (honestly until last week I hadn't even written a kiss before haha). Also that Ziam megapost on tumblr...omg so much material to work with...I totally agree "their feelings are already perfect" they pretty much ship themselves. If it were more over the top it wouldn't be them. Wahoo Ziam buddies, group flail!!!

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misspostpotter April 7 2012, 04:52:47 UTC
Oh my god you sent this to your teacher? (It's really really good by the way.)

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tmk_fics April 8 2012, 06:49:42 UTC
Haha thanks! And it was my teacher from high school, so she doesn't teach me anymore, at least!

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russsel April 7 2012, 05:38:59 UTC
omfg YES

i don't usually read nc-17 fics but the premise just drew me in and i didn't know what i was getting into but thank god i did cause holy shit that was a fun ride! seriously, it was funny in all the right ways and asdflkjadslfkj no words NO WORDS i just really really enjoyed reading this so thank you so much for writing it, you're amazing!

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tmk_fics April 8 2012, 06:50:45 UTC
:D :D :D Thank youuuuu I am glad you found it humorous because I literally re-read this and was like...Niall is funny why is this fic not more funny :|. Thank you again so much!!

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jennifer_95 April 7 2012, 11:27:38 UTC
OMG hot...

and OMG YOU'RE TEACHER READ THIS, WHAT DID HE SAY????

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tmk_fics April 8 2012, 06:51:57 UTC
Thanks :). I told her it was my roommate trying to embarrass me and I think she bought it but it was over Skype and you can't tell with this fancy new technology (and therein lies the reason I accidentally sent it to her, tbqh).

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loribeast April 7 2012, 18:04:27 UTC
this is totally my ot3 and there is never enough fic and oh my god this is so good. and perfect. and even though I liked the ziam undertones, the ending was just mksjhevdgushyij and really sweet oh lord. this was really good.

(and I can't believe you sent this to your teacher, that is hilarious and also what but anyway this fic is fabulous).

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tmk_fics April 8 2012, 06:53:17 UTC
OT3 THOUGH. BUT ACTUALLY. Thank you so much for reading!!! I'm glad you liked the ending!! Also, I think she just found it really funny? I mean I died, but I think she was basically OK with it, haha

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