Fic: The Grand Annual Four Farthings Show - G to NC17 20/?

Sep 22, 2007 23:59


Happy Birthday,
Bilbo and Frodo!


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slipperieslope September 23 2007, 02:24:07 UTC
*saves chapter*

I am so glad there will be more of this and that you have not lost your muse. Welcome back.

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tiriel_35 September 24 2007, 21:48:23 UTC
Thank you, Slip! I can't tell you how relieved I am to be with them once again when I truly thought I never would.

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sams_star September 23 2007, 04:50:37 UTC
What a marvelously vivid and detailed world you've created! It's great to get immersed in it with Frodo and Sam!

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tiriel_35 September 24 2007, 21:50:11 UTC
Thank you! It's so wonderful to be back with them again - I'm hoping for a straight run through to the end, now... They have waited too long already!

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hildigard_brown September 23 2007, 05:34:16 UTC
Ohohohoh! A new chapter of GAFFS! *squees out loud* I can't tell you how happy I am to see this, T. It's almost 1 a.m. here and I was about to turn off my pc for the night when I made one last check of my flist and this popped up. I've been up since about 6 and can't focus my brain any longer, but I have saved the chapter to my 'Tiriel' folder and will savor it with my coffee tomorrow. I can hardly wait! The toffee apple scene... *squees again*

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tiriel_35 September 24 2007, 21:54:38 UTC
It's thanks to you that the first part of the t.a. scene exists at all - I lost the whole file for 20 and only had the outline in the main file. Had it not been for the mail to you, I'd have had even more to re-write. Hope you enjoyed Meg, too!

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hildigard_brown September 27 2007, 01:59:31 UTC
Oh my, I didn't realize the t.a. scene was part of the crash. It's good to know that I'm not the only one who obsessively routinely saves personal emails 'just for future reference'. I'm glad you were able to recreate Meg and the nap scene--the image of Frodo's cheek resting on Sam's leg while he slept just warmed my heart. And Meg facing down that rebellious ewe brought to mind the confrontation between Aragorn & the Mouth of Sauron at the Black Gate. *snort* The whole chapter was just chock-full of things that made me smile. I'm so looking forward to the rest of the story--especially when Sam presents his Frodo's Rose corsage and the final, private "at last" scene that they (and we) have waited so patiently for. *hugs you*

BTW, I noticed over the weekend that you took all the HOC stuff down. I hope you're just tweaking and haven't given up on it!

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tiriel_35 September 28 2007, 09:05:45 UTC
There’s actually quite a lot of such waffle detail to come before they get their just deserts (two chapters thereof, since they have waited so long and they are both young…) There should still be another four chapters after this one, possibly five. I just hope I can keep you smiling for that long! And I can give myself the willies remembering the not-so-long-ago days when an inbox held 3MB max, and retaining mails was almost impossible. One of my S/E stories only exists at all because I sent it in an email to S; I’d forgotten I had written it and only found it when reading/clearing very old emails.

*blushes for shame, never having sent mail promised a while ago* Truthfully, finishing TGQ and its pwp left a huge void in my life that felt very much like a bereavement - I have barely been back there since (couldn’t face coming here when I couldn’t write F/S either; thank heavens for MM, where HoC nearly always obliges!) I can get post-posting blues after a single chapter; when GAFFS is finally complete I expect the Black Hole may last ( ... )

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elenya54 September 23 2007, 07:54:06 UTC
A lovely chapter, Tiriel. :) I liked the Suffolk Blackface in (slight) disguise.

all Sam could see were thick dark lashes on very pink cheeks, and nostrils flaring as if he had just run hard and was short of breath

I'm not surprised after such very suggestive toffee apple eating. :D

He wriggled a little, to get comfortable, and his head began an inexorable sag downward to his chest.

And I knew just where that were heading... :)

Now what we need is "Show Day the Third - Night" :D

btw, there's a bad link at the end of chapter 19: took me back to chapter 19.

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tiriel_35 September 24 2007, 22:01:34 UTC
Thank you Elenya - I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. "Show Day the Third - Night" does exist - and for a wonder, although I lost the individual file, almost everything in it was still in the main file so I shall not be scrabbling for a lovescene as with TGQ. But there are a few chapters to come before they do...

Thanks for the heads-up - link fixed! ♥

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tiriel_35 September 24 2007, 22:04:41 UTC
Thank you, Julia - I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. It's such a relief to be able to write them again after to so long when I thought I never would. And the pleasures of the day can only increase as this day wears on... :-)

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