FF7: Unexpected Side-Effects Part XII

[tir_synni]

Title: Unexpected Side-Effects: Part XII
Fandom: FF7
Pairings: Zack/Aeris, Sephiroth/Cloud/Zack
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: besides the tentacles?
A/N: Looked over by artimusdin with much gratitude on my part. All mistakes are still mine

Comments

[icarusdefiled]

There were a few typos, nothing major, and it did nothing to take away from the awesomeness that was another USE update.

Vincent's reaction to finding Zack with Cloud made me giggle and I loved the Miroslaw scene. Bad ass Cloud is FTW.

Sephiroth's whole shy flirting thing was just too adorable for words.

Edit: Oh, and your summary? So freaking awesome.

[tir_synni]

Feel one hundred percent to point out said typos. :) Always feel free to point out typos.

Vincent wasn't supposed to be in that scene. He insisted. ^_~

*^__^* Thanks.

[icarusdefiled]

“Zack reached for Cloud’s biscuit, spoon scraping the button on top.”

"In fact, that might have been his dying expression." Not a typo, just awesome. I only found one when I read it over. I am chalking the other two up to being overly tired and overly stressed. Did you know that some people think that it is perfectly okay to dump a three week old kitten by the side of the road, at three A.M., in the rain?

[kitty11chan]

If you find the fuckers, kill them slowly.

[tricksterschild]

Whoohoo! Update! And finally an explanation about the Shadow thing. I was starting to think the Shadow was Cloud's dad who served in the war and was a super secret Shinra ninja! (Don't mind me, due to delay's I built up a whole back story in my head). Great job on this chapter, i look forward to more:)

[tir_synni]

*amused* That was...thought out. *laughs* Kinda interested in the back story now. :)

Thanks.

[sinnatious]

OMG YAY! \o/

Cloud is still being badass and I love it. And he's even getting some straight talk (though the term is ironic in this case) and some explanations from Zack, however brief! Of course, the whole conspiracy around the Nibelheim mission continues to mount. The tension surrounding that part of the story gets me all antsy and nervous and really makes me appreciate that whole 'in-over-your-head' feeling Cloud's been suffering from the beginning

[tir_synni]

The explanations are coming...just gradually. Like other things. *coughs*

The soap and such was totally Dina's fault. That particular conversation wiggled its way in there.

I felt coffee had been greatly neglected this chapter and had to change that. :)

...actually, a good chunk of the little details are due to Dina. Feel free to blame her. *^__^*

[artimusdin]

I HAVE NO REGRETS

[sigart]

Nyahahahaa, awesome! I don't think I've told you before, but I really adore your Sephiroth. He's so very cute! And I was waiting for someone to get jealous or think Cloud's new level of attention was undeerved.

The scene with Reno was great too. Now I wonder, if Reno really had been waiting to ambush him, would he have succeeded as Cloud thought or is that just Cloud's insecurities speaking up again? Great that you've achieved that... edge? Balance? Between what's really happening and what the character perceives.

Now I'm left wondering exactly what is in Cloud's classified personal files. I know canon says he was rejected from SOLDIER because of weak psyche but your plot seems a lot more interesting! ^_^

[tir_synni]

Don't worry, Cloud still has many problems left on that front.

*sunny smile* Fun part about all of this being from Cloud's POV: the world will never know.

And as for that last bit, well...

[kitty11chan]

Meanie.

[madisuzy]

Woot update! Sephiroth being shy, Vincent being protective and Cloud being tuff. I have so much love for this fic and it grows stronger every chapter. Wonderfully written, as always!

[tir_synni]

*^__^* Thank you!

[madisuzy]

Is it odd that I caught the Outsiders reference in your (completely true) review?