FF7: Unexpected Side-Effects Part XII

Apr 24, 2010 23:36

Title: Unexpected Side-Effects: Part XII
Fandom: FF7
Pairings: Zack/Aeris, Sephiroth/Cloud/Zack
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: besides the tentacles?
A/N: Looked over by artimusdin with much gratitude on my part. All mistakes are still mine ( Read more... )

ff7, fic, sxcxz, tent!fic

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icarusdefiled April 25 2010, 03:55:54 UTC
There were a few typos, nothing major, and it did nothing to take away from the awesomeness that was another USE update.

Vincent's reaction to finding Zack with Cloud made me giggle and I loved the Miroslaw scene. Bad ass Cloud is FTW.

Sephiroth's whole shy flirting thing was just too adorable for words.

Edit: Oh, and your summary? So freaking awesome.

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tir_synni April 27 2010, 00:33:42 UTC
Feel one hundred percent to point out said typos. :) Always feel free to point out typos.

Vincent wasn't supposed to be in that scene. He insisted. ^_~

*^__^* Thanks.

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icarusdefiled April 27 2010, 03:59:11 UTC
“Zack reached for Cloud’s biscuit, spoon scraping the button on top.”

"In fact, that might have been his dying expression." Not a typo, just awesome. I only found one when I read it over. I am chalking the other two up to being overly tired and overly stressed. Did you know that some people think that it is perfectly okay to dump a three week old kitten by the side of the road, at three A.M., in the rain?

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kitty11chan April 27 2010, 21:01:40 UTC
If you find the fuckers, kill them slowly.

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icarusdefiled April 28 2010, 04:26:03 UTC
I will. They dumped Nebel because he was sickly and most likely the runt. Two days of better food and near constant attention and affection and he is running around me like I'm the jungle gym at the park. I don't get why people just wont take responsibility for their actions. I had to take the poor thing to the vet because I couldn't get his eye to open. If their female wasn't taking care of the kittens it became the owners job, at least until they could find good homes for them. Animals are not toys. You can't just get rid of them when you get bored. They are a lifetime commitment. For the entirety of that animals life you are responsible for them just as would a child. It makes me hope like hell that not only are they caught for doing this, but that they never breed. I would hate for their newborn to come down sick and just be dropped at a fire station because they were too much to handle.

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