[fanfic] Thirty First Kisses - Kiss #20

[tiptoe39]

ZOMG I'm in love with this one.

Title: Thirty First Kisses - Kiss #20
Author: tiptoe39
Rating: PG for language
Summary: It’s like Mohinder said. They’re family. That means he’ll never lose them.

This is the 20th of 30 possible ways Matt and Mohinder could share their first kiss, written for the 30_kisses challenge. The theme was "the road home" (kaerimichi).

Comments

[pinky0007]

Wow!!

Thank you for that. I've never read a fan fic that made my tear up like that before.

[tiptoe39]

aww, don't cry, it's only a fic!

[tiptoe39]

thank you honey! i'm so glad you enjoyed!

[jessieflower]

I loved that Matt's fantasy came true. Nice work. :D

[tiptoe39]

Me too! Thank you!

[ilsaluvsrick]

Massive squee!

Loved Matt's slow journey to realizing what a home and family really are. So many little details I adored; Molly having hippie parents(which would explain her being so ok w/ the two dads), Matt wanting her to be his daughter, the Jewish Christmas, Matt being the cool cop with the college kids, Matt comforting Simon...

Just loved. And not to get greedy, but will there be more Lap of Luxury tonight?

[tiptoe39]

not tonight, maybe tomorrow....

On edit, now that I'm home from work, yes, thank you so much for noticing all those little pieces, I rather liked them too... :hugs you:

[crystal_mk]

Love, everlasting love for you and your stories.

I adore Matt; he's so sweet staying with the little boy. And Molly is just so adorable and Mohinder is so sweetly patient.

[tiptoe39]

Yeah, I wanted Matt to go home but he refused, the rat bastard. :D He is just too good a guy.