Comments | tinted_glass: The Brothers Grimm drabble. 100 words. I almost wanted to write fanfic. *shock*

tinted_glass

The Brothers Grimm drabble. 100 words. I almost wanted to write fanfic. shock

Aug 28, 2005 01:04

Will wakes up and thinks he’s forgotten how to breathe, and in truth, he can’t breathe, but it isn’t because he’s forgotten how to. Will can’t breathe because Jake’s lips are pressed firmly against his own, quivering every now and then, warm, wet, deliberate. A touch of Jake’s fingers on Will’s cheek, and Will is suddenly sitting up, furious, and ( Read more... )

movie: the brothers grimm, drabbles

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Oh my... foreverquatre August 28 2005, 09:51:50 UTC

That was sweet, hot, angsty, and sad all at the same time. Aw...

Heheh... Well, we're all more used to Will/Jack, now aren't we?

*uses her WHOA icon to fit your WAOW* tinted_glass August 28 2005, 18:09:27 UTC

I think you're the only person on my flist who's seen this movie. And I don't think I would have seen it if it weren't for you, so this drabble, it's all your fault! XD *HUGS YOU*

And hey, Will/Jack, I'm up for that. *smiles*

*do WHOA and WAOW really fit?* foreverquatre August 28 2005, 21:22:35 UTC

Aw, well I'm glad you liked it okay, at least. I just would hate to mention a movie to someone and they go and see it and then dislike it... At least the movie was slashy, heh.

Will/Jack is always good... ¦d

In my world, where nothing makes sense. ;) tinted_glass August 28 2005, 23:23:18 UTC

I've said this a hundred times probably, but I am so hoping that there will be slashy Will/Jack moments in the next two movies. *crosses fingers!*

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kiyasama August 28 2005, 18:15:20 UTC

Very nicely done! I second the motion to expand this since we all really want Jake to tie down Will and have his merry way with him ^_~

hello there! *smiles* tinted_glass August 28 2005, 18:24:32 UTC

I *SOBS* REALLY DO WANT TO EXPAND THIS. Because it currently doesn't make much sense as to why Jake would randomly (maybe not so randomly) kiss his brother while he was sleeping. And then you've really got to wonder how on earth Will was AUTOMATICALLY able to tie the kiss to the waking of Sleeping Beauty! XD I've actually got two fic ideas that are floating around in my head, and it is making me so miserable because I won't have time once school starts in three days. T__T

Thank you for reading, though! *beams*

without you all I'm ever going to be is incomplete *hugs* aefallen August 28 2005, 19:36:37 UTC

I GO AWAY FOR FIVE DAYS AND THERE ARE SO MANY POSTS OF YOURS FOR ME TO LOVE. :D

XD I would so watch this movie only it has NOT COME OUT IN SINGAPORE YET SOBS. When I was last in the cinemas I just saw the TRAILER for it T_T! But I will watch it because I WANT TO FANGIRL WITH YOU.

By the way, I loved that drabble. It's short, and intense, and I loved how so much is said and so much is done in it. I love the beauty of Jake not wanting a princess in a story that's all about fairy tales, and this is beautiful! I'd love to see more. *hugs you*

(Fanfic! Even if you won't finish it! Because it's all going to be that much more beauty in this world and fandom, even if it's never finished. *hugs*)

BSB LOVE. OMG I MISSED YOU tinted_glass August 28 2005, 23:20:57 UTC

These past couple of days I have been wibbling and thinking, WHEN IS CHRIS GOING TO COME BACK BECAUSE I MISS HER. If you had not posted today, I totally would have made a "I MISS CHRIS SO DAMN MUCH" post. But since you're here, I will simply have to settle for HUGGING YOU AND SQUEEING BECAUSE <333!!! YOU'VE COME BACK TO ME. XDDDD

OMG YES. SEE THIS MOVIE SO YOU CAN FANGIRL OVER THE OBVIOUS JAKE/WILL LOVE. HEATH LEDGER AND MATT DAMON LOOK SO GOOD TOGETHER. CANON OMG. I want someone to screencap the movie already so that I can snatch up all the almost-Jake/Will-kiss pictures. Will should have let Jake kiss him. He needed to stop being a repressed moper. :P

FANFIC. *flails* Maybe I will try!

OMG DO YOU KNOW I WAS MAKING THIS: aefallen August 29 2005, 06:57:19 UTC

You wrote BSB LYRICS AND I WAS OMG: BECAUSE LOOK WHAT I WAS MAKING:

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Re: OMG DO YOU KNOW I WAS MAKING THIS: tinted_glass August 29 2005, 07:03:45 UTC

*JUST. CLINGS TO YOU SO TIGHTLY!*

demonicplatypus August 28 2005, 19:57:53 UTC

HAHAHA I love it! You're good at slash.

tinted_glass August 28 2005, 23:24:05 UTC

Thank you so much! *hugs you* That means a lot to me. :)

gravi_girl123 August 29 2005, 01:16:28 UTC

Ahhh *screams* I love you!! I'm friending you right this instant because you did this to me in only 100 words.

Write me a fic, I'm not too proud to beg. Honestly, this was so good. It captured so much with so few words. And GAH, how did you do it??

I'd quote, but I'd end up copy pasting the whole thing.

tinted_glass August 29 2005, 02:29:40 UTC

Ahhh *screams* I love you!! I'm friending you right this instant because you did this to me in only 100 words.
I am sitting here like the total geek I am and GRINNING FROM EAR TO EAR BECAUSE YOU LIKED THE DRABBLE ENOUGH TO FRIEND ME. *FRIENDS YOU RIGHT BACK!* *smiles*

It captured so much with so few words.
I am glad to hear it!

And GAH, how did you do it??
Honestly? This "drabble" started out as 500-something words of pure drivel! I was miraculously able to prune it down to 100. How? I'm still not certain. XD

I'd quote, but I'd end up copy pasting the whole thing.
That is so sweet of you to say! *hugs you!*

aefallen August 29 2005, 06:50:40 UTC

THE BOTH OF YOU MADE ME JOIN grimmcest. HAPPY NOW OMG. XD *HUGS THE BOTH OF YOU* I came online and I was - so Mina is into it, and OMG JACE IS INTO IT TOO?! What is this EATING UP MY FRIENDSLIST? And obviously because I love you both so much and because Mina's drabble PWNS MY SOUL, I JOIN. :D

tinted_glass August 29 2005, 06:53:34 UTC

OMG. YAY. XD

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