The Brothers Grimm drabble. 100 words. I almost wanted to write fanfic. *shock*

[tinted_glass]

Will wakes up and thinks he’s forgotten how to breathe, and in truth, he can’t breathe, but it isn’t because he’s forgotten how to. Will can’t breathe because Jake’s lips are pressed firmly against his own, quivering every now and then, warm, wet, deliberate. A touch of Jake’s fingers on Will’s cheek, and Will is suddenly sitting up, furious, and

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[gravi_girl123]

Ahhh *screams* I love you!! I'm friending you right this instant because you did this to me in only 100 words.

Write me a fic, I'm not too proud to beg. Honestly, this was so good. It captured so much with so few words. And GAH, how did you do it??

I'd quote, but I'd end up copy pasting the whole thing.

[tinted_glass]

Ahhh *screams* I love you!! I'm friending you right this instant because you did this to me in only 100 words.
I am sitting here like the total geek I am and GRINNING FROM EAR TO EAR BECAUSE YOU LIKED THE DRABBLE ENOUGH TO FRIEND ME. *FRIENDS YOU RIGHT BACK!* *smiles*

It captured so much with so few words.
I am glad to hear it!

And GAH, how did you do it??
Honestly? This "drabble" started out as 500-something words of pure drivel! I was miraculously able to prune it down to 100. How? I'm still not certain. XD

I'd quote, but I'd end up copy pasting the whole thing.
That is so sweet of you to say! *hugs you!*

[aefallen]

THE BOTH OF YOU MADE ME JOIN grimmcest. HAPPY NOW OMG. XD *HUGS THE BOTH OF YOU* I came online and I was - so Mina is into it, and OMG JACE IS INTO IT TOO?! What is this EATING UP MY FRIENDSLIST? And obviously because I love you both so much and because Mina's drabble PWNS MY SOUL, I JOIN. :D

[tinted_glass]

OMG. YAY. XD

[aefallen]

OMG I LOVE YOU A LOT. :D I was, "WAIT SHE IS ONLINE, I SHOULD TELL HER TO STAY ONLINE SO I CAN TALK TO HER, OMG NO I WILL NOT WASTE TIME, SIGNS ON AIM." XD