Fic: The End [one-sided Cookleta, pg-13, one-shot]

[tinkertoo]

this is me, being in one of my moods again. i should be working on the tons of other stories i've got on my computer, instead i wrote this to get emotion out.

Title: The End
Author: Zach // tinkertoo
Pairing: one-sided David Archuleta/David Cook, David Cook/Kim Caldwell
Rating: pg-13
Summary: David just wants to forget the day all his dreams were crushed

Comments

[archiecookie]

OH...MY...GOD...

I am sooo crying right now! Poor bb! *cuddles him and holds him close*

Gah, this was sooo good, and sooo sad! I hate Kimberly witha fiery passion! she always ruins everything!!!s

And omg, im sooo glad you're back! You used to be my favorite writer back when i was still a lurker! in fact, i think i spammed your Deviantart a few times. LOL, its good your back though!

Great job again!

[tinkertoo]

if this ever happens, i will kill her. but this is never going to happen so i can be happy with that.

awww, thank you! i...really wish i knew what else to say to such an amazing comment!

[archiecookie]

OMG, believe me, i will be standing right there next to you, holding a rope ready to strangle her, lol.

Aw, your welcome! Thank you for writing this wonderful little story!

[tinkertoo]

i think everyone in Cookleta will back us up LOL

thank you for reading & commenting!

[clover71]

oh my goodness. this is so painful. the warning is there, but i still read it because it's from you. now i'm like bawling like a child here.

this was remarkably written. the emotions were clearly conveyed. if they weren't, i would be crying my heart out right now.

i don't know why, but i feel archie's pain. so much. like i understand what was going through his mind and heart and that time while he looked back in the past.

[tinkertoo]

aww i'm sorry it was so painful. i mean that was the intention but still, i'm sad it's making people sad.

thank you so much though, this is one of the best compliments a writer can get (in my opinion anyway)

[jehane_writes]

ohhh, hon. such raw emotions, so vividly conveyed.

*hugs*

(I would totally kill her too, just saying ;) )

[tinkertoo]

*hugs* thank you bb!

(i think we all would)

[xxencielxx]

oh. my. god! wow. That was soo sad... My poor Cookie had to watch as Archie jumped. and it was even worse because he touched him.. I'm like crying. wow I'm pathetic. poor Cookie... *huggles*
Very painful but very beautifully written. I can feel the pain.

[tinkertoo]

aww i'm sorry you were crying. *hands tons of tissues* but thank you!

[xxencielxx]

aw its ok. I cry easily. xD Thanks for the tissues. lol. and your welcome. :D

[mcrcookie]

DDDDDDDDDDDDD:

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

BAWL

FU COOK, WHY WOULD HE LET BB D DO THAT

[tinkertoo]

he tried to stop him, he was just a little late which makes it worse i know but....i'm sorry!