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Fic: The Dream That You Wish [Cookleta, one-shot, pg]

Jul 22, 2010 13:39

Title: The Dream That You Wish (Will Come True)
Author: Zach // tinkertoo
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: pg
Word Count: 2,990
Summary: A Cinderella story, written in true fairytale fashion in which the boy wishes and his dreams come true, and the prince gets his 'queen.' With a bit of magic thrown in to make it all happen.
Prompt: au_bingo Fantasy & ( Read more... )

fic: one shots, fic: au_bingo, pairing: cookleta, fandom: idol

Comments 19

asweetdownfall July 22 2010, 17:59:17 UTC

Awwww, that was lovely! And adorable, especially the ending. <3 It's really hard for me to envision Claudia and Jazzy as the evil stepsisters though. D: (Nothing to do with your writing - just my head, I guess!)

tinkertoo July 22 2010, 18:08:20 UTC

thank you! it was kind of hard for me to see them as evil too, but i guess it made more sense in my mind for it to be them since they're his actual sisters instead of some random people i made up.

also, love the harry potter in your icon. can it be november yet?

jehane_writes July 22 2010, 18:11:01 UTC

It was cute and fun and I liked the magical genderbending! I think Cookleta particularly lends itself to the fairytale genre :)

tinkertoo July 22 2010, 18:13:22 UTC

thank you sweetie! i think so too, they are so adorable it's kind of easy to make them into a fairy tale!

jackiesjunkie July 22 2010, 18:29:55 UTC

Awwwww! <3

tinkertoo July 23 2010, 16:13:33 UTC

<3

idk what your icon is from but it's cute!

jackiesjunkie July 23 2010, 18:39:57 UTC

I don't know where it's from either. It's one that apiphile made. :-)

jslvr4vr July 22 2010, 18:54:44 UTC

I love fairytales and this was perfect. Only thing I didn't like was that Cook was the prince again. I've only read two stories that have David as a prince the rest have him as the 'girl'. Great job though.

tinkertoo July 23 2010, 16:15:30 UTC

thank you!

i guess Cook's just more believable as the prince? idk, i'm sorry! maybe someone'll write it the reverse soon

jslvr4vr July 24 2010, 00:44:39 UTC

It's not your fault! The more I thought about it Cook is more believable as a prince. No offense to David but he seems to sweet and cuddly to be a really good prince. I know there can be a few but I don't think David could be one. I mean they can both be princes but Cook would still be the enactor. I love reading when David starts stuff but it just seems more like Cook to be the protector/Dom than David.

(Then again I think this way about Adam and Kris also. Adam is the protector, Kris doesn't need protecting but isn't the top.)

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tinkertoo July 23 2010, 16:15:59 UTC

YES that would've been awesome!

thank you! <3