Comments | tingke2104: A Soft Whisper

tingke2104

A Soft Whisper

Mar 02, 2012 11:20

Title: A Soft Whisper
Pairing: YamaChii
Genre: fluff, angst
Rating: PG
Word count: 461 words

The tears he had been holding back fell and he clenched his fist tighter. The nails cut into his palm and the pain pushed him further.
"I don't love you anymore."
It came out as a soft whisper, he didn't intend it to be that way. He wanted it out loud and ( Read more... )

fanfic, drabble, yamachii

Comments 26

yukistrawberry March 2 2012, 04:12:51 UTC

awwww~~~ I have to say... I love this to bits even though i cried when the two still loved each other :'( This is truly fantastic! I love this type of fics the most!

great job!

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 04:27:21 UTC

<3 Sankyuuu!
Love you for reading and commenting!

hikarichan92 March 2 2012, 04:37:27 UTC

Awww ~ this is so sweet,even though also so sad at first ~
nice one!
d(><)b

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 07:02:03 UTC

Thank you! :D

fifi1048 March 2 2012, 05:03:28 UTC

Why you make me go on a roller coaster ride??

You meanie! *pout* You made Yama-chan cry like that~
It's a sweet ending as always. <3
If it wasn't for the sweet ending I will be shaking you and whining when I see you. Hahaha.

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 07:05:43 UTC

What roller coaster? Free ride good ma~ ^^

Hahaha. I was thinking about Yuri but then I want Yuri to be the one protecting this time.
Main point of this fic is "If that is so.. why are you crying Ryosuke?"

Of course sweet ending! I love happy endings~~ <3

fifi1048 March 2 2012, 07:55:18 UTC

. . . . *pout*

Sounds like a devilish Yuri instead. Yama-chan is still naive?

And I'm a sadist for loving not so nice happy ending. MUAHAHAHAH!

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 08:17:10 UTC

Yuri is a devil by nature. He just looks innocent. Hahaha.
Happy ending is <3 ok!

bgirlie March 2 2012, 05:57:46 UTC

OMG~!!!
i loveee this tingke chan~~~ *hugs*
even though it's angst on the start
but really sweet ending~~
thank u sooo much for write this~

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 07:12:34 UTC

^^
Arigatou ne~ *hugs*

deyuna_decchan March 2 2012, 08:07:48 UTC

*take a tissue*

huaaa i love this fic!
Yamada asked to break up but he cried and chinen with gently wiped his tears :'D so sweet and full of love XD

please make another nice fics like this, tingke-chan~~~ XDDD

tingke2104 March 2 2012, 08:18:38 UTC

Uwaa~ Sankyuuuu!
YamaChii is full of loooove!

deyuna_decchan March 2 2012, 09:10:09 UTC

YamaChii itsumademo~