✎ fanfic - hetalia - this is all ichi's fault

[tinfoiltennis]

Title: the dysfunctional hetalia family fic that is completely ichi's fault
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: FAR TOO MANY. England, America, Sealand, Australia [unspeakingly's OC], Portugal [OC], Jamaica [OC], Brazil [OC]; Canada, Hong Kong, Macau, East Timor and the majority of the former British and Portuguese Empires are mentioned in some way.

Comments

[sascharin]

OI, MINE MI EQUIPMEN’ YUH BRAZILIAN BLOOD CLAAT!

Yeah, see that^? That killed me dead. A++ felbb

ignore the rp journal :>

[ofhopeandglory]

Heee, I'm still so glad you approve of her! That line and pretty much all of Jamaica's dialogue was so much fun to write. >_>

/ignores

[sascharin]

That's why you should write more of her /HINTHINT

[unspeakingly]

So, now that I have the time to sit down and comment, and the mental capacity to say more than alksdjfls;lsdkfjsf ♥ -

Ahhhh, Fel, this was absolutely perfect and I couldn't imagine it to be any better, in all honesty. ♥ ffff the opening scene was wonderful and immediately hooking and hilarious and appropriately adorable.

And then asdlfjlfj I love all of your OC nations forever. Their personalities and little quirks and interactions and everything and sdlkfj they're so awesome and cute and they will continue to best mine forever at every turn. And you portray Australia perfectly and her reactions are awesome and spot-on (and lmfao, you did put that part in with America shoving poor England aside) and the pre-feast scene is hilarious and amazing and ffffff the actual feast itself is hilarious to imagine and if I wasn't fail and it wouldn't be so uncoordinated and all over the place I would totally write it.

And then last scene. J-just. Ahhhhhhhhh, s-so adorable. *u* The present was a wonderful surprise, and then when he put the

[tinfoiltennis]

FFFFFFF this is the most awesome comment to wake up to in my inbox ever. I am still so glad you like it because as I got further and further into it I was like "... WHAT IS EVEN GOING ON IN THIS THING ANYMORE. I DON'T KNOW, BUT I AM DETERMINED TO REACH THE END." So yes I shall be forever 8D over the fact that you like it so much and that I actually didn't fail with Australia because I would never have forgiven myself if I had mucked up your OC ;^;

And fff, thank you for the comment on my OC nations! I'm just glad that people actually seem to like them and not hate them because. I kind of love dreaming them up, sob. Although Portugal's still my bebe. Even if Jamaica might soon be joining him there. orz. Also I can totally understand not writing the feast to be perfectly honest, because I had enough trouble trying to co-ordinate something with so many nations in as it was and that would have been... too much chaos for my fingers to handle typing, I think. XD