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timehasa_way

Satan's Sister

Oct 11, 2009 23:35

Title: Satan's Sister
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki
Prompt: 001. Beginnings.
fanfic100 table: here
Word Count: 9,358
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, angst, gore, mentions of sexual violence.
Summary: A recurring monster on the show turns out to be very real when it kidnaps Jared after he leaves set late one night. He's certain ( Read more... )

spook_me, spn rps, r, j2, fanfic100

Comments 45

dugindeep October 12 2009, 04:04:13 UTC

OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING POSTING THIS AT 11PM?!?!?!?! PEOPLE HAVE TO WORK IN THE MORNING NOT READ DAMNIT.

timehasa_way October 12 2009, 04:06:05 UTC

Hahaha, 12:00 AM, here! Guess I wasn't thinking, since I'm off tomorrow. :P

dugindeep October 12 2009, 04:07:33 UTC

GOD DAMNIT I'M TOTALLY STAYING UP TO READ THIS THING, I THINK.

dugindeep October 12 2009, 14:00:16 UTC

OKAY OKAY. I tried to stay up to finish, but my eyes just wouldn't cooperate and stay open. I read the rest of it on the train and YAY! Boys love each other. I love how you made it so much about the emotions that Jared has, and how it wasn't just that someone was out there as him, but that Jensen was in danger, and how much he loved him and just wanted him to be safe.

Fine job wifey! This has totally inspired me to get going on mine :-D

timehasa_way October 12 2009, 22:53:10 UTC

Awww, thank youuuu! ♥ I was kinda worried about this one, lol.

Yay!! I can't wait to read yours! XD

macbyrne October 12 2009, 14:03:49 UTC

*shivers*

Okay, that was uber-creepy; I really liked Sadie, and I did not see her being a shapeshifter!!! Really took me by surprise! I liked how you added to what we 'know' about shapeshifters from show, and I also liked the little bait-and-switch you did there at the end, when we thought Jared was safe, and look out!! NO HE'S NOT!!!

Great job!!!

timehasa_way October 12 2009, 22:53:43 UTC

Yay! Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

13chapters October 12 2009, 18:57:25 UTC

He leans close, and Jared tries to turn away from the smell of blood and the messy sight of his face. “I already killed your boyfriend.”

And this is when I went "NOOOOOO!!!!"

Very, very creepy. But the end is just right. Yay schmoopy boys! Good job!

timehasa_way October 12 2009, 22:54:20 UTC

Aww, I could never let anything happen to Jensen. XD

Thank you!!! ♥

dugindeep October 13 2009, 00:24:42 UTC

Except for when you almost had him kill himself and sent the hell dogs on his ass?

timehasa_way October 13 2009, 00:31:30 UTC

LOL, well, there was that. And all the other stuff I've written.

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screamoutloud October 12 2009, 23:16:56 UTC

AWESOME!!
THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING =]
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timehasa_way October 13 2009, 00:10:30 UTC

THANK YOU!!! :D