Standard How's My Driving post here. You guys know the deal. Be constructive, not rude. I will not hesitate to delete any comments that are made here that I think aren't constructive criticism of the character but just outright bashing (and I have a pretty high tolerance for bad mouthing). I would prefer any concrit to not be anonymous, but I will ( Read more... )

[The feed clicks on to first show the growing-too-familiar rain of fire. Then a building finishing it's burning decent to the ground. The viewer can hear someone breathing a little heavily and maybe swearing under their breath ( Read more... )

[At first the only thing the viewer can see is darkness. The silence it
brings is shattered by the steady sound of pounding and then the screen
is awash with light. Once it has adjusted it focuses in on a man
standing on a knocked down door. He bends down to pick up the device but
doesn't give it much attention.]

What the-

[He lets out a low whistle.]

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