until I die
Title: Until I Die
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Football RPS, Cristiano Ronaldo/Kaká
Summary: He's lived a thousand lives but can't ever reach the end. AU, re-verse.
☆ More of a fairytale than the truth. Every word is a lie.
★ NO DIALOGUE WHAT-SO-EVER. DEAL WITH IT. Un-betaed. Feedback is always welcome.
♥ for sunnyshinee :*
( How does one say 'hey, I've been reborn for all eternity up 'til now and you and me are somewhat soulmates since we've spent a thousand of lifetimes together, you wanna try to be lovers' to another person without sounding batshit crazy? )
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Football RPS, Cristiano Ronaldo/Kaká
Summary: He's lived a thousand lives but can't ever reach the end. AU, re-verse.
☆ More of a fairytale than the truth. Every word is a lie.
★ NO DIALOGUE WHAT-SO-EVER. DEAL WITH IT. Un-betaed. Feedback is always welcome.
♥ for sunnyshinee :*
( How does one say 'hey, I've been reborn for all eternity up 'til now and you and me are somewhat soulmates since we've spent a thousand of lifetimes together, you wanna try to be lovers' to another person without sounding batshit crazy? )
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YOU ARE THE MOST AWESOME PERSON EVER. 당신 정말 좋은분입니다~
This fic is... oh god, you've included everything I love in it - I love spiritual stuff, I love meant-to-be-soulmates-forever kind of storylines, I love your humour.
This time Ricardo's a fly. His life officially sucks.
You never fail to make me laugh: why are you so hilarity? T_____T; The storyline could've been depressing but of course, you used your awesome writing skills to make it light-hearted and adorable. And oh, the ending - They don't make it that far though, the plane crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Life's freaking irony. - IDK whether to call it heartbreaking or just plain genius. ;D
나는 이것을 읽고 또 읽고 할것입니다. The fic is just that awesome. :D Thank you so much ♥ 너무 너무 고마워. 탱큐 베리 머치. 8DDD
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AHMAHGAWD ADVANCED KOREAN HEADING MY WAY~~ AND I'M TOO LAZY TO SWITCH TO THE KOREAN KEYBOARD HAHA. you get english instead heehee~~ ;D
hee~~ I'm so happy that you like it ♥ I almost had a nervous breakdown when I posted it since it's so different and I had no freaking clue if the theme would even make any sense. and I must have proof-read it at least a hundred times before I pressed the post button haha.
I couldn't end it with "they lived happily ever after" lol. That would be too awful. I also love the soulmates storyline but it's hard to make it non-cliché, you know? And I suck at writing angst, I hate being sad haha.
Your feedback motivates me like cray cray. you always leave me these awesome comments that make me do happy dances and flail and whatnot. YOU MOTIVATE ME. thank you for being the awesome person you are and thank you for simply exsisting. really. ♥
Imma reply to that other huge ass comment tomorrow, promise. I need to go to bed now if I'm gonna be able to get ( ... )
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LOL YOU LAZY BEETCH (; I cracked out my keyboard and rusty Korean just for you and you don't even reply in Korean?! I am mighty the offended! D:<
I didn't just like it - I adored it! :DD I'll repeat myself over and over again: you are amazing ♥. I totally get what you mean about the nervousness though - totally feel that way like 80% of the time I write something. It's hard to tell when your writing is okay or totally off the mark sometimes D: BUT THIS WAS AMAZING SO DON'T HAVE ANY DOUBTS OR I'LL KILL YOU. Yes, kill you just for doubting. (:
Yeah, a 'happily ever after' wouldn't really fit. And the dying together thing is actually very, very fitting! Occasionally, writing an ending to a fic gets stupidly difficult. Heh. I personally think that writing humour is a lot harder than writing angst. As in, there is more than one brand of humour so it's hard to know when you're getting it right for the widest range of readers possible. Angst, on the ( ... )
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I'm so glad that you liked it! What made the fic light-hearted was probably the knowledge that there always was another chance after death? like they were stuck in a time loop. which probably came from the fact that I'm an incurable romantic who likes the idea of eternal soulmates in a non-cliché way haha.
Once again, thank you ♥!
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That's exactly it! And I do have a thing for eternal soulmates too, which made the experience of reading this fic even better. :D
What I completely forgot with all my squeeing is to ask you whether you'd mind having this story archived here. *puppy dog eyes*
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I think many people like that idea, it gives some kind of comfort that you're gonna meet the same persons you get to know in this life even after death, even though it's not that realistic C:
oh, so totally not minding! is it like any other fiction site where I register and post/upload or do I just sit back and let someone else do the work? :]
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