until I die

Nov 08, 2010 00:19

Title: Until I Die
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Football RPS, Cristiano Ronaldo/Kaká
Summary: He's lived a thousand lives but can't ever reach the end. AU, re-verse.

☆ More of a fairytale than the truth. Every word is a lie.
★ NO DIALOGUE WHAT-SO-EVER. DEAL WITH IT. Un-betaed. Feedback is always welcome.
♥ for sunnyshinee :*

How does one say 'hey, I've been reborn for all eternity up 'til now and you and me are somewhat soulmates since we've spent a thousand of lifetimes together, you wanna try to be lovers' to another person without sounding batshit crazy? )

fandom: football, pairing: cron/kaka, !fic, #pg, -one-shot

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sunnyshinee November 8 2010, 11:34:38 UTC
I... I really love you. T_____T

YOU ARE THE MOST AWESOME PERSON EVER. 당신 정말 좋은분입니다~

This fic is... oh god, you've included everything I love in it - I love spiritual stuff, I love meant-to-be-soulmates-forever kind of storylines, I love your humour.

This time Ricardo's a fly. His life officially sucks.

You never fail to make me laugh: why are you so hilarity? T_____T; The storyline could've been depressing but of course, you used your awesome writing skills to make it light-hearted and adorable. And oh, the ending - They don't make it that far though, the plane crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Life's freaking irony. - IDK whether to call it heartbreaking or just plain genius. ;D

나는 이것을 읽고 또 읽고 할것입니다. The fic is just that awesome. :D Thank you so much ♥ 너무 너무 고마워. 탱큐 베리 머치. 8DDD

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tiivibear November 9 2010, 22:58:26 UTC
NO PROB BABE, I LOVE YOU TOO. IT WAS REALLY NOTHING :')

AHMAHGAWD ADVANCED KOREAN HEADING MY WAY~~ AND I'M TOO LAZY TO SWITCH TO THE KOREAN KEYBOARD HAHA. you get english instead heehee~~ ;D

hee~~ I'm so happy that you like it ♥ I almost had a nervous breakdown when I posted it since it's so different and I had no freaking clue if the theme would even make any sense. and I must have proof-read it at least a hundred times before I pressed the post button haha.

I couldn't end it with "they lived happily ever after" lol. That would be too awful. I also love the soulmates storyline but it's hard to make it non-cliché, you know? And I suck at writing angst, I hate being sad haha.

Your feedback motivates me like cray cray. you always leave me these awesome comments that make me do happy dances and flail and whatnot. YOU MOTIVATE ME. thank you for being the awesome person you are and thank you for simply exsisting. really. ♥

Imma reply to that other huge ass comment tomorrow, promise. I need to go to bed now if I'm gonna be able to get ( ... )

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sunnyshinee November 11 2010, 07:34:15 UTC
WELL I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT I APPRECIATE EVERY BIT OF EFFORT YOU PUT IN YOUR WRITING ♥

LOL YOU LAZY BEETCH (; I cracked out my keyboard and rusty Korean just for you and you don't even reply in Korean?! I am mighty the offended! D:<

I didn't just like it - I adored it! :DD I'll repeat myself over and over again: you are amazing ♥. I totally get what you mean about the nervousness though - totally feel that way like 80% of the time I write something. It's hard to tell when your writing is okay or totally off the mark sometimes D: BUT THIS WAS AMAZING SO DON'T HAVE ANY DOUBTS OR I'LL KILL YOU. Yes, kill you just for doubting. (:

Yeah, a 'happily ever after' wouldn't really fit. And the dying together thing is actually very, very fitting! Occasionally, writing an ending to a fic gets stupidly difficult. Heh. I personally think that writing humour is a lot harder than writing angst. As in, there is more than one brand of humour so it's hard to know when you're getting it right for the widest range of readers possible. Angst, on the ( ... )

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tiivibear November 11 2010, 22:36:46 UTC
I AM LAZY THOUGH! AND PROUD LOL. I EMBRACE MY FLAWS, DEAL WITH IT! B-) BUT REALLY, I TYPED THAT COMMENT RIGHT BEFORE BEDTIME SO... JUST-I-FICATION ( ... )

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sunnyshinee November 12 2010, 13:24:12 UTC
LMAO. Alright, I'll forgive you this time. BUT NO MORE CHANCES.

I WANT SWEDEN'S WEATHER. OMG. Today was like 30 degrees, so I'm totally dreading what the weather will be like in summer. AND I WAS ON A TRAIN AND IT WAS STUFFY AND SMELT STRONGLY OF PEE. bitchwhinemoan :3 ONE DAY I SHALL COME AND STALK YOU AND BASK IN YOUR COLD WEATHER, MM~

omg, sequel! I waaaaant, but I won't nag you just yet because I don't want to kill your writing inspiration or whatnot :3 Yes, that means be prepared for FUTURE nagging.

HMM, I THINK I CROSS THAT LINE QUITE A LOT BUT ANYWAYYYYY. I can never write good humour. I just... I don't know, it usually comes out as 80% dialogue and the actual padding and shit is all slapstick stuff. I have no sense of humour! D: (and sureeee, of course you don't get drunk and write, I totally believe that ;3 ( ... )

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tiivibear November 14 2010, 18:49:48 UTC
YOU'RE JUST SAYING THAT, YOU LOVE ME TOO MUCH TO NOT GIVE ME OTHER CHANCES ;D ♥

TRUST ME, YOU DON'T. I AM SO FREAKIN JEALOUS OF YOUR WEATHER T__T wait, do you have Celcius or Fahrenheit? cuz if it's in Celcius then yes, gief me plz! D: (...except that pee smell... yuck)

Won't probably be writing this week, I have so much in school T__T

This one time, me and my friend wrote a parody of Buffy the vampire slayer, and we got a comment saying that it was hilarious but we had to be heroin addicts for making that shit up lol.

AND OMG YOU ARE SO NOT CROSSING THAT LINE. YOU'RE VERY FAR FROM IT TYVM :*

AND OMG I AM SO NOT DRINKING AND WRITING LMAO.

NEVER. I'LL NEVER GO INTO HIDING MOAHAHA. JUST GONNA STAND HERE AND WATCH YOU STALK~~~~ ♥♥♥ you love my barca boy like bojan loves older men

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sunnyshinee November 16 2010, 02:09:48 UTC
HOW CAN YOU SEE RIGHT THROUGH ME? I DON'T UNDERSTAND...

It's celcius here! How can you like hot weather yeeeeesh. In summer it gets so hot that everyone sits around in short shorts and singlets and still sweats like crazy. I WANT COLD WEATHERRRR ):

Aww, I DON'T MIND WAITING THOUGH. (: Good luck with school, though - hope it's not getting too stressful!

LMAO at your anecdote. Now I'm really curious as to what you wrote exactly. 8D

AND I AM SO CROSSING THAT LINE HALF THE TIME, SHUTTUP.

AND I TOTALLY KNOW YOU ARE. YOU CAN'T LIE TO ME. :D

BUT IT'S MORE FUN WHEN THEY HIDE! 8D NEVARRRRR.

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tiivibear November 19 2010, 11:33:35 UTC
LUKE.... I AM YOU FATHER! DUNDUNDUUUUUUNNNNNNN!

30 DEGREES YES PLZ. WE HAVE 0 WITH SNOW TT__TT DON'T WANNA HAVE SNOW... YET. IT'S NOT EVEN DECEMBER TT__TT

JUST THE AFTERMATH OF THE HISTORY EXAM. STILL, LOL. Nah, not too stressful but we're at the last chapter in the book, which just hit me like, yesterday haha.

ahahaha, just a lot of grammar errors and pointless, random stuff and of course some homoerotic undertones XD you don't wanna read it.

YOU'RE SOOOO NOT. YOUSHUTUP. D:

DRINKING AND WRITING IS BAD M'KAY? YOU CAN CAUSE PEOPLE BRAIN DAMAGE AND TOTAL WASTE OF THEIR TIME M'KAY? IAMSONOTDOINGTHATM'KAY? ORAMIM'KAY?

OH, I SEE. WELL, MY POLAR BEAR IS FASTER THAN YOUR KANGAROO IN THE SNOW SO I GUESS IT'S A RACE THEN MOAHAHAHA!

LOOK AT MY NEW ICON! 8D I AM IN LOVE ♥

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