'Danger and Disco Balls' - an original fiction

[tigger_01]

Fic: Danger and Disco Balls (one shot)
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG-13 for mild horror and allusions to violence
Summary: Zach never knew that a routine operation in a lonely surgical ward would ever come to this.
Written for the morbid fic challenge (unbetaed), spawned from a particularly bizarre lunchtime conversation between myself,

Comments

[tigger_01]

O.O You make me never to want to have surgery. Ever. Again. Not even if I need it! O.o

Sorry! But I'm sort of glad it hit the mark as well. :)

Thanks for the comments about the characterisation - I had a lot of trouble with trying to work out WHY the character (Zach) was doing this - ended up changing that several times.
I changed the paragraphing a little bit - does that make it better? You're absolutely right - I found it hard to read as well. ;)
But thanks for the comments on that - it's what my english teachers always say. :P

*hugs back* Thanks so much! I'd like to write more, but I'll have to get an idea first. That tends to be the problem with original fic. :P

[tigger_01]

You're right. :)
I tend to be worse than most writers - finding the resolve to just admit something is finished and putting it up is so difficult for me. xD

[And on a totally and utterly random note: OOOH. Jaared. Yummy icon. ;) *grins stupidly*]

[achairsomewhere]

okay :)
a) loved it,
b) VERY glad you put this up after i went into hospital :P
ummm c) i was trying to remember what prompt we gave you as well as the surgical thingy but *shrug* :D
LOVE IT!
how did we get onto this topic??? they've all turned out rather freakish :P but that was the point wasn't it.
this is very good, hope you write more :)
xoxoxox

[tigger_01]

Hhaha, thanks. :)
I have a feeling I've just freaked out a lot of people. I was so scared when I realised how many people this actually happens to. *grin*
Um - I think the prompt was basically psycho doctor who puts things in patients - and I think B helped with the death part, because I wasn't sure how to end it. :P

I don't know how we got to this topic, honestly. All I remember is - (wwait - it had something to do with your paint cans, didn't it? because we saw them in the art room and i said something about blood...) - Lisa's look of total horror at us laughing like maniacs.

Thanks, honey. *big hugs*

[agt_league]

This was one intense piece of writing!

I loved where you were heading with this fic. It was deliciously creepy yet very intriguing and Zach [EEE, you used Zach! :D] sounds terrifying yet so hot at the same time, if that makes sense.

I really like the flow of this piece and the descriptive words.

Really nicely done, Tigger. LOVE. ♥

PS: Thank fuck I've never had surgery, LMAO.

[tigger_01]

Thanks, Janny. That means a lot. All I really wanted is for it to make sense and be creepy and it seems I did that? xD

Yeah - I was looking for a name (thought about Sammy, but I love him too much) - and it reminds me a bit of Sylar, so Zach it ended up being! xD
[Even though I don't think there are too many Zacs in Australia...]

THANK YOU! *big hugs*

[agt_league]

Anytime, Tigger. It was a pleasure to read. :D

Now get onto that GG fic! *squishes*

[tigger_01]

Oh, of course! Nate/Vanessa. :)
Come here, brainstorming buddy! *squishes back*
It'll have to be a one-shot, because I don't think I'm in the position to write any kind of feature length fic.
So - there are two options: It can be a fic about Nate and Vanessa meeting for the first time and feeling the spark of connection OR it could be a fic about them together, with some explaining of a fictional backstory.
I'm thinking the first option.... what do you think?

About where they might meet... what do you think?

MILD SPOILERS FOR THE LAST EPISODE! PROCEED WITH CAUTION!!!!!
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The only thing I'm worried about is where they would meet (this is based on the most recent episode and the relationships it changed) - S/B are besties and Nate refuses to speak to Blair...
Perhaps he could meet her through Jenny? She's his only 'friend' at the moment...

[tigger_01]

Thanks, Kallie. That means a lot coming from you. :)

Hm - the first person thing came because I wanted to explain the mindset of the doctors and why they were doing what they were - I hoped it would come off as more creepy that way, than some gory description of what they were doing.

Thank you. :) *big hugs*