'Danger and Disco Balls' - an original fiction

Jan 13, 2008 14:24

Fic: Danger and Disco Balls (one shot)
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG-13 for mild horror and allusions to violence
Summary: Zach never knew that a routine operation in a lonely surgical ward would ever come to this.
Written for the morbid fic challenge (unbetaed), spawned from a particularly bizarre lunchtime conversation between myself,
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agt_league January 13 2008, 13:46:21 UTC
This was one intense piece of writing!

I loved where you were heading with this fic. It was deliciously creepy yet very intriguing and Zach [EEE, you used Zach! :D] sounds terrifying yet so hot at the same time, if that makes sense.

I really like the flow of this piece and the descriptive words.

Really nicely done, Tigger. LOVE. ♥

PS: Thank fuck I've never had surgery, LMAO.

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tigger_01 January 14 2008, 22:46:17 UTC
Thanks, Janny. That means a lot. All I really wanted is for it to make sense and be creepy and it seems I did that? xD

Yeah - I was looking for a name (thought about Sammy, but I love him too much) - and it reminds me a bit of Sylar, so Zach it ended up being! xD
[Even though I don't think there are too many Zacs in Australia...]

THANK YOU! *big hugs*

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agt_league January 15 2008, 10:19:40 UTC
Anytime, Tigger. It was a pleasure to read. :D

Now get onto that GG fic! *squishes*

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tigger_01 January 15 2008, 10:42:54 UTC
Oh, of course! Nate/Vanessa. :)
Come here, brainstorming buddy! *squishes back*
It'll have to be a one-shot, because I don't think I'm in the position to write any kind of feature length fic.
So - there are two options: It can be a fic about Nate and Vanessa meeting for the first time and feeling the spark of connection OR it could be a fic about them together, with some explaining of a fictional backstory.
I'm thinking the first option.... what do you think?

About where they might meet... what do you think?

MILD SPOILERS FOR THE LAST EPISODE! PROCEED WITH CAUTION!!!!!
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The only thing I'm worried about is where they would meet (this is based on the most recent episode and the relationships it changed) - S/B are besties and Nate refuses to speak to Blair...
Perhaps he could meet her through Jenny? She's his only 'friend' at the moment...

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agt_league January 15 2008, 11:27:53 UTC
I'm here, babydoll. :D *sits on your lap*

One-shots are my favourite type.

I like the first option too. Mmm... YAY!

They could meet a party. There's ALWAYS parties in NYC.

Oh, yeah. That's an excellent idea.

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tigger_01 January 15 2008, 11:45:21 UTC
True, but whose party? They would never go to the same club - and the only one they are both talking to at the moment is Jenny. So perhaps she invites them both to a party at her house?
It doesn't really matter, I'm just being kind of pernickity, that's all. I guess I'll just have to leave Blair alone because there's no way they would be invited to the same party anymore. Not after what he said to her.
*sighs*
Stupid Upper East Siders. Why do their lives have to be so complicated? ;)

Let's sort out the fun details, then - what is Vanessa going to be wearing?
[I actually for a change have some semi sort of plan about where I'm heading with this. This might ACTUALLY get completed! ;) ]

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agt_league January 15 2008, 12:53:41 UTC
Hm... okay maybe no party. Nate wants someone to talk to and he calls Jenny and she tells him to come over. Meanwhile Vanessa just pops by to see if Jenny wants to go hang out or something -- like she normally does.

Just an idea, heh. :)

Ooh, I love V's retro jackets and jeans - she looks awesome in those.

YAYAYAY! It's great to hear you say that cause I can't wait 'til this is finished so I can read it.

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tigger_01 January 16 2008, 01:33:09 UTC
The only problem with that is that Jenny wil spend the whole time talking to Nate - you can SO tell she likes him. :)
I think I'll stick with the party idea - hostess Jenny will be out of the way, as well as Serena and Dan, and both Nate and Vanessa would be invited.

Hm, definitely. I think I'll see what she was wearing to Blair's party, because she looked good in that. :)

Aw, thanks. I'll try and finish it, promise. I can't guarentee it's quality though!!

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agt_league January 16 2008, 06:29:39 UTC
True that. She's infatuated by the Upper East Siders. :p

Okay, awesome. \o/

Yey!

I bet it will be. *squirms excitedly*

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