FIC: Five ways to remember a partner

Aug 20, 2011 15:22

After episode 20, I had a major urge to write a fic about Barnaby regaining his memories of Kotetsu. Problem was, I couldn't decide how it should happen! Sooo, I cheated ended up going with the classic "five things" style story (and hurrying to post it before episode 21 came along and wrecked them all) ^_^;

Pairing: One implied Yuri/Kotetsu, three ( Read more... )

fanmade: fic

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kirikaito August 20 2011, 15:39:45 UTC
...the first one scares me.

The last one is woefully yet wonderfully short and sweet :)

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galerian_ash August 21 2011, 21:36:54 UTC
...And I should probably be scared that I found Yuri to be extremely fun to write XD;

Really glad the last one worked for you! I debated a bit whether to include it, or ditch it in favor of another one (there's surely some unwritten rule about not having six parts to this type of fic, after all).

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lovexamination August 20 2011, 15:47:12 UTC
O-oh. Ohhh. I don't usually comment on these things, but- this was so absolutely wonderful and fantastic and sweet. I loved every single bit- the chilling implications in the first one, Kotetsu's through the entire fic- though, I have to say I especially loved him in the second one, simply because of his lines and the way you wrote him. He's so perfect in this and so lovable and sad in a very Kotetsu way oh gosh... and the fourth one just tugged at my heartstrings, while the last was so perfectly short. Actually I also really enjoyed the third one- no I loved all of them okay. In other words I can't love on this fic enough yes.

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galerian_ash August 21 2011, 21:47:06 UTC
Well, I'm very happy you did reply -- because this was a wonderful comment to receive. I have a pretty huge grin on my face right now, lemme tell ya!

When I write fanfiction, I always worry that the characters might be OOC. So to hear you thought Kotetsu was spot-on really, really makes me happy (especially since I love the guy to bits). And I'm super-excited that you liked all the parts so much; I can't even begin to tell you how much that means to me. Seriously, thank you ♡

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winnnner1234 August 20 2011, 15:48:37 UTC
I'm all for the last one cos it's less painful to watch and more awwwww xD

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galerian_ash August 21 2011, 21:49:45 UTC
*grins* It would be rather sweet if they ended up going with something like that, wouldn't it? Then again -- just based on previous experience -- I trust that whatever they come up with will be pretty much perfect~

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ookami_lin August 20 2011, 16:01:11 UTC
I love all of this! All of it! <3

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galerian_ash August 21 2011, 21:51:04 UTC
Yay, thank you! ♡

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cinnamonical August 20 2011, 16:10:45 UTC
Eeee! Loved loved loved this! Well-done. I love the one where Kotetsu goes ahead and throws himself off a skyscraper, because that would be totally like him. XD

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galerian_ash August 21 2011, 21:55:14 UTC
Oh man, I'm really glad that worked for you (I love Kotetsu so I wanted to be sure to do him justice, LOL)! Thank you sooo much ♡

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