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tifaching

Mesmerize 2/2

Jan 17, 2014 20:06

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skeletncloset January 18 2014, 02:06:02 UTC

I'm SO EXCITED TO START READING I'M SHAKING.

tifaching January 18 2014, 02:37:33 UTC

skeletncloset January 18 2014, 03:21:47 UTC

*_* That was deliciously dark.

tifaching January 18 2014, 03:37:30 UTC

There is not enough Azazel fic out there. I snagged this prompt as soon as I saw that's what the artist wanted and it was off to "how can we hurt Dean this time?" land.

Thank you!

kinkthatwinked January 18 2014, 04:26:52 UTC

Nice job of pulling "Devil's Trap" dialogue into this. I wish I could see the scene where Dean & Sam talk about this later. I'll have to reread this, but is Sam aware that YED fucked Dean while wearing John's body?

And man, if John had lived, would they have ever been able to get past this? Even in those last moments when John knew he was about to die, could he and Dean have even looked each other in the eye? Way to pile on even more angst!

God, you put these men, especially Dean, through such twisted torture. Nice job. :D

tifaching January 18 2014, 23:58:23 UTC

About two days before I posted this I was lurking on a flistie's post about how fics that use a lot of episode dialogue are a big turn off and another flistie was agreeing that it usually made her back button and I was all "oh, hell, that's my whole story" so it's good to see it's not a turn off for everyone. :)

And hahaha. Talk? Sam: Dean what happened, really? Dean: Nothing.

And yeah. There were a couple of really good Azazel rapes Dean during Devil's Trap fics written right after the ep and before we knew the extent of Dean's injuries and the extent of John's life span. I read them a long time ago, but no...things were not easy between them.

"God, you put these men, especially Dean, through such twisted torture." It's kind of what I live for. : )

Thank you so much!

dmitchell1985 January 18 2014, 05:56:57 UTC

This was really, really well done. I enjoyed the different way you approached Azazel and his powers. I also liked all of the canon tie ins that made the scenes you wrote fit perfectly.

tifaching January 18 2014, 23:59:56 UTC

Thank you! Canon Azazel didn't have the mind control powers that some of the psychic kids did, so him possessing mind control experts seemed like a good way to go. He seemed like the kind of demon(along with Alastair) that would want to know all kinds of cool things. : )

melitta4ever January 18 2014, 06:20:29 UTC

Oh, double torture from Azazel, sweet!
That good for nothing John Winchester makes me so angry. Bastard!

tifaching January 19 2014, 00:00:54 UTC

Yeah, John was not the father of the year, that's for sure. And yesssssssss Azazel. I love him so much...such a fantastic bad guy.

Glad you liked it, thanks!