NCIS fic: "A Fine Thing" - NC-17 [Tony/Ziva]

[tielan]

FANDOM: NCIS
TITLE: A Fine Thing
SUMMARY: She always supposed that sex with Tony would be like a starving man and a meal - great gulps of delight, swallowed swiftly, and consumed in ferocious need.
RATING: NC-17
CATEGORY: PWP, Tony/Ziva
DISCLAIMER: Not mine, making no money, please don't sue.
NOTES: Written for the Porn Battle X to the prompt '

Comments

[awesomemorning]

Oh, this this this. Loved it, it has that air, that sweetness yet intimacy between the two of them, and I love the almost fragility of him exploring and touching her body. An instant favourite.

[tielan]

Thank you!

I love the layers of their relationship; it's a very complex and complicated one, I think.

[anjali_organna]

SDLALSDFKJASL;DKFJAS ARE MY THOUGHTS ON THIS.

[tielan]

INCOHERENCE IS GLADLY WELCOMED. :D

[littlesammy]

That struck just the right way. And the last line is perfection. Thank you. :)

[tielan]

You're welcome! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it!

[aerial312]

Very nice. Really good description. I particularly liked the line "murmuring things she doesn't hear as his eyes watch her like the heavens watch the earth beneath the bright bright sun." The phrasing was just beautiful.

[tielan]

Thank you!

I want to write more stories from Ziva's POV: she's such an interesting and complicated character - everything she's been through and how and why...

[imacartwright]

Ooooohhhhhhh... yes. That's waht I'm talking about, right there. Loved it, as if you couldn't tell! ;)

[tielan]

It may show, just a leetle. :D

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