Comments | tielan: fic: Precisely My Cup Of Tea

tielan

fic: Precisely My Cup Of Tea - PG-13 [girl!John/Teyla]

Dec 02, 2007 20:05

Advent fic: 2nd December, 2007

TITLE: Precisely My Cup Of Tea
SUMMARY: Over time, you learn all kinds of things about yourself.
CATEGORY: AU, genderbender, femmeslash, girl!John/Teyla
RATING: PG-13
DISCLAIMER: The characters are borrowed, not mine, and no money is being made from them.
NOTES: For the sga_genderfuck FEMSLASHED! challenge. With extreme thanks to triciabyrne1978 ( Read more... )

challenge, pairing: john/teyla, show: sga, characters: teyla emmagan, fic, characters: john sheppard

Comments 13

accidentalfan December 2 2007, 20:46:29 UTC

That was so cool. I liked how you developed Jo by showing us snippets of time. The ending then just seemed natural. And very nice to think about.

tielan December 3 2007, 20:40:07 UTC

Well, I needed to develop Jo as a character separate to John, so it worked in my favour as well as the reader's favour and the plot.

Thank you!

greenconverses December 2 2007, 21:43:13 UTC

John/Teyla femslash = win and love on so many levels!! I'm glad that you didn't go for the 'traditional' genderfuck of girl!Shep and one of the guys. It makes it all the better. :)

And you always have the best ending lines. *iz jealous*

tielan December 3 2007, 20:41:33 UTC

Dude. I would never go for the traditional genderfuck. You should know me better than that!

And ending lines...you got to get them at the start, or work them in right at the end - whichever's easier. You can do it - you have done it! I knows you have! :)

ceitie December 3 2007, 21:24:51 UTC

I love this Sheppard, with a deep, true love. This story is incredibly insightful, and Jo and Teyla together at the end was just perfect.