Achilles' Heel

[neshel]

Title: Achilles' Heel - Part 1 of the Weakness trilogy
Characters/Paring: Bennet, Sylar, Mohinder - vague/implied Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to 3.03 "One of Us, One of Them"
Warnings: Nothing worse than what's on the show.
Word Count: 858
Summary: Bennet observes an interesting meeting.

Notes: This idea deserves further expansion

Comments

[hari_kari]

Loved this! Well done. Mohinder popped into my head as soon as Bennet mentioned finding Sylar's weakness, so I really enjoyed this. :D

[neshel]

Thanks!

[shimmeree]

Very cool.

[neshel]

Awesome. =)

[eridanie]

heee! It's perfect. The absolute mylariest of interpretations of the last episode. I love it!

[neshel]

Yay! Thank you! =)

[oximore]

*bounce everywhere*

I adore it!!! :D

[neshel]

Yay! Glad to hear it!

[shinealightonme]

I thought the whole "observer" point of view was a little weird, at first, but by the end of the fic I loved it. We never really have a good idea what's going on in Sylar's head, so it worked really well to have his actions told to us through someone else's eyes. Plus, that is exactly the sort of thing that Bennet would do, so it worked out. Thought it was a great fic through and through.

[neshel]

Definitely a different angle for me. I usually like to get in Mo and Sy's heads, but it was almost easier to write this way.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!