Achilles' Heel

Sep 30, 2008 13:54

Title: Achilles' Heel - Part 1 of the Weakness trilogy
Characters/Paring: Bennet, Sylar, Mohinder - vague/implied Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to 3.03 "One of Us, One of Them"
Warnings: Nothing worse than what's on the show.
Word Count: 858
Summary: Bennet observes an interesting meeting.

Notes: This idea deserves further expansion ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, character: noah bennet, character: sylar, character: mohinder suresh

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ladywilde80 September 30 2008, 19:45:07 UTC
Well I think I already told you that I thought this ficlet was made of wonderful but I'll say it again! :D I love this and I agree, this would be awesome if the show takes a similiar turn. I am all for that XD

*loves*

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neshel September 30 2008, 19:48:11 UTC
*hugs* What would I do without you? Clearly I was crazy for thinking this was crap.

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ladywilde80 September 30 2008, 20:05:58 UTC
Yes, totally nuts but so damn talented it hurts!! *hugs*

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neshel September 30 2008, 20:13:02 UTC
Well I've always been proud of my insanity. =) Although in this case it's less awesome.

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poemwithnorhyme September 30 2008, 20:21:39 UTC
I totally shouted "MOHINDER!" when Bennet said he would find his weakness, so this fic was exactly what I needed. And to have it written by you! Omg, squee!fest! Seriously! I MISS YOU SO FRIGGIN MUCH, GIRL! *hugs you real tight*

This was fantastic! Bennet's characterization, your description of poor Mohinder and what he got himself into.. and Sylar! omg, Sylar! Just, everything about this: superb!

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neshel September 30 2008, 22:06:49 UTC
^_^ Ugh, I feel really bad now because I keep meaning to leave you comments on your new fic and then I keep getting distracted/putting it off. I fail! *begs for forgiveness*

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levitatethis September 30 2008, 20:54:48 UTC
The two of us apparently exist on the same wavelength. You go and post this story and this morning I posted some speculatory thoughts about how this season might play out for Mohinder and Sylar and, lo and behold, we're within the same sphere. Which is simply awesome!

I've always liked the third party point of view when approaching Mohinder and Sylar. I've only done it a couple of times but it's one of my favourite POVs to read and this is a perfect case in point. Bennet really works well here because of his connection to both men and, unlike Peter, there's a distrustful distance that exists. Bennet doesn't like either Mohinder or Sylar and that feeds his almost callous attitude towards them. The thing is it's that coldness that makes his realization of there being something more between them all the more potent. Bennet then is really like an uncompromised observor (unlike someone like Peter who would be more emotionally involved).

I love that he's spying on Sylar just looking for something, anything, to bring him down. And I ( ... )

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neshel September 30 2008, 22:23:20 UTC
I've never done an outside point of view before, but that was how this fic came to me so I ran with it.

I love that we're on the same wavelength here. Great minds think alike, and all that. =)

Omg, I would be sooo happy if they ended up on the same side in Volume 4. Hell, what Mylar fan wouldn't? I won't get my hopes up though.

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neshel September 30 2008, 22:24:22 UTC
Bennet would probably enjoy using Mohinder to get to Sylar. Two birds with one stone! You know he still harbours a grudge over all that.

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widestance75 September 30 2008, 21:17:23 UTC
THIS WAS MADE OF CAPSLOCKIAN AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!

I really loved this story, and the possibilities it holds. Ugh. Can you imagine if this actually happened on the show? I can!

Love!

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neshel September 30 2008, 22:24:59 UTC
Clearly I can imagine it, but do I expect it? I dunno...

Anywho, CAPSLOCKS! YAY!

Thank you!

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