Title: Achilles' Heel - Part 1 of the Weakness trilogy
Characters/Paring: Bennet, Sylar, Mohinder - vague/implied Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to 3.03 "One of Us, One of Them"
Warnings: Nothing worse than what's on the show.
Word Count: 858
Summary: Bennet observes an interesting meeting.
Notes: This idea deserves further expansion
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*loves*
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This was fantastic! Bennet's characterization, your description of poor Mohinder and what he got himself into.. and Sylar! omg, Sylar! Just, everything about this: superb!
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I've always liked the third party point of view when approaching Mohinder and Sylar. I've only done it a couple of times but it's one of my favourite POVs to read and this is a perfect case in point. Bennet really works well here because of his connection to both men and, unlike Peter, there's a distrustful distance that exists. Bennet doesn't like either Mohinder or Sylar and that feeds his almost callous attitude towards them. The thing is it's that coldness that makes his realization of there being something more between them all the more potent. Bennet then is really like an uncompromised observor (unlike someone like Peter who would be more emotionally involved).
I love that he's spying on Sylar just looking for something, anything, to bring him down. And I ( ... )
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I love that we're on the same wavelength here. Great minds think alike, and all that. =)
Omg, I would be sooo happy if they ended up on the same side in Volume 4. Hell, what Mylar fan wouldn't? I won't get my hopes up though.
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I really loved this story, and the possibilities it holds. Ugh. Can you imagine if this actually happened on the show? I can!
Love!
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Anywho, CAPSLOCKS! YAY!
Thank you!
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