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thrihyrne

Strange-Eyed Constellation, Post 2

Jun 16, 2007 19:49

Title: Strange-Eyed Constellation
Pairing(s): Past Fred/Seamus, Seamus/Dean, eventual Fred/Seamus/Dean, Ron/Harry
Rating: This chapter NC-17
Summary: War can make strange bedfellows; peacetime allows kindred spirits to join together. Seamus discovers both, and in being true to the baffling desires of his heart, believes that love needn't come ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, fred, fic, seamus/dean, hp, strange-eyed constellation

Comments 13

knic26 June 17 2007, 01:14:35 UTC

It was nice to see how Seamus and Dean got together
from the setups you gave earlier. This is really nice
so far. After the rocky relationship of Seamus and
Fred, I am waiting patiently to see how this becomes
a threesome.

If the type looks odd, lj was acting up...

thrihyrne June 17 2007, 18:57:13 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying it. This isn't the fastest-moving story in the world, so patience may be warranted before the three of them become an actual threesome. :) But they will.

domerupert June 17 2007, 05:02:32 UTC

Dean is just ♥

There is no way I'm going to stop reading this series!

thrihyrne June 17 2007, 18:57:52 UTC

Yeah. Dean. ::swoon::

I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!!

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thrihyrne June 17 2007, 19:03:50 UTC

Oh Maple, thank you so very much!! I'm glad that Seamus' impetuosity comes across as believable, as well as Dean's confession. I guess I'd figured they'd been doing their own individual UST for a while, and once Dean cracked open the door, Seamus yanked it wide.

The uncut part is Callum's influence, speaking to an actual British bloke and all that...

I'm blushing at your commentary about my language. I could say the same thing about your wordcraft, you know!! The phrase about being stuck between a hard wall and even harder Weasley comes to mind :)

I'm so pleased that you're enjoying this. While I don't know that it'll be as long as Fling Wide, it just might be. There's a lot of ground to cover to get these three together. Thank you so much for commenting.

celandineb June 17 2007, 05:45:09 UTC

Seamus let out a breath he'd not realised he'd been holding as Dean cautiously pulled their joined left hands down on top of a prominent bulge in his trackshorts.

"Oh fuck," Seamus whispered.

"You do this to me," Dean said helplessly.Oh, WOW. The "cautiously" in that first sentence just undid me. So perfect; I love that Dean spent a lot of time thinking this over, being sure that it was real and not just a momentary whim, before he told Seamus how his feelings had changed. It's also neat that it is specifically Seamus that Dean has these feelings for; he loves the person, not the gender. ♥s you for that ( ... )

thrihyrne June 17 2007, 19:15:25 UTC

Thank you so very much for your comments!

It's also neat that it is specifically Seamus that Dean has these feelings for; he loves the person, not the gender. ♥s you for that!

Yes, :cough:, once again, there's absolutely NO author self-insert in this story. None at all.

I'm so pleased that you liked Seamus' thoughts on oral sex, and yes, with the awkward. I was thinking of you and your story "Passages" during that part, actually, and how one of the two commented on how he really wasn't all that fond of the 69 as it was better in concept than in practice, lol. As the author, I, too, concur!! And now I've found your pdf version of Passages and I almost want to just sit and read the whole thing from beginning to end...Yay that you're with Dean on the word 'boyfriend.' There really isn't a good word, but when writing this, he was adamant that he wouldn't use that term. Dean has some unexpected idiosyncrasies that keep surprising me ( ... )

celandineb June 17 2007, 19:26:12 UTC

Oh, I am totally with Dean on "boyfriend." I pretty carefully avoid using "boyfriend" or "husband" or even "lover" in slashfic; none of them really convey the right feeling for me. Very occasionally I get stuck and have to use some such term, but I try not to. "Boyfriend" is too juvenile, despite being pro-gay marriage I just dislike the term "husband" for some reason, and "lover" overemphasizes the sex part when there's really so much more. *grumbles about the English language, so many words and yet none that are right*

LOL that we are feeding off each other with the 69 thing; I think I made that awkward in "Passages" because of something you had said. ;-) [Heh, and isn't it fun to reread older smut?]

I can see that it will be a struggle to get Fred involved! You haven't made it easy on yourself there, so I do look forward to finding out how you resolve that. *g* I'm sure that the characters will come through for you eventually.

there's absolutely NO author self-insert in this storyHeh. Yeah. Well, that "person not ( ... )

mrsquizzical June 17 2007, 10:47:30 UTC

Seamus' heartbeat stumbled in his chest.

love that.

Dean paused, as though wary of the words he wanted to say.

"I'm yours, Seamus. I don't know how else to say it."

Seamus breathed deeply of the air of trust, nodding his head, though Dean couldn't see it.

i kept thinking this was getting too sentimental and then... somehow... it just wasn't.

really lovely. so enjoyed the 'confession'.

and what a wonderful challenge to describe the sex and loving without sight for dean, and with seamus accomodating that.

very yummy.

i'm looking forward to more.

thrihyrne June 17 2007, 19:19:31 UTC

Many thanks, Mrs. Q! I'm so pleased that you're enjoying this; it's a bit intimidating, writing a new pairing, but I'm glad that it seems to be a rewarding read.

I did worry about them getting sentimental, but thankfully they stopped, lol. They can both be quite serious, but Seamus' nature is pretty ebullient, unless he's pissed off, of course.

So glad that you're finding this a rewarding read; I'm really enjoying spinning this tale of both likely and unlikely joinings.