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thoth_moon

Had Things Been Different (conclusion)

Feb 06, 2007 18:59

He gave Kurama one last defiant glare, and then lowered his head and lapped at Kurama’s nipples. Immediately, the Fox squirmed a little, a soft moan escaping him. The emerald eyes, which had crinkled in laughter at Yusuke mere moments before, had now squinted shut. Beneath his lips, Yusuke could feel the rise and fall of Kurama’s chest increase ( Read more... )

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Bravo! yaoi_lover00 February 7 2007, 03:23:10 UTC

This is one of the best fics I've read recently! It didn't just have a lemon; it also had a PLOT! A GOOD plot! And it was (somewhat) IC! Yusuke's poem was very good; and it actually sounded like something he would write! And the last two paragraphs sum up the fic perfectly! Bravo!

Re: Bravo! thoth_moon February 7 2007, 16:09:11 UTC

*Two* lemons, thank you very much ... XP

Thanks. ^__^ I had my Fondue, but aside from that I do prefer that there be some form of a plot.

Haha, Yusuke's poem--I suck at poetry. Then I thought of a really good poem, then I remember, it's Yusuke. Now I'm gonna have to fuck it up. =D So, a swear word here, a reference to a private body part there ...

Glad you enjoyed it.

hcolleen February 7 2007, 11:20:47 UTC

I've never had problems posting chapters...and some of my chapters get up to 20 pages (of Times New Roman 12 point...*shrugs*)

Anyways...congrats for finishing the challenge :D and for taking it beyond the original challenge and broadening your horizons (it's good for you)

Now to finish my own chapter so I can get more than 2 hours of sleep.

thoth_moon February 7 2007, 16:11:50 UTC

*sniff* LJ hates me ...

Yea me! But don't expect any Yusuke/Hiei/Kurama from me *anytime* soon in the future (someone at ff.net suggested it in a review to this story). No, don't you get any ideas, I'm being uber careful in replying to any of your memes from now on! *sticks out tongue*

But yes, honestly, I did have fun with this.

softy3140 February 8 2007, 03:57:07 UTC

This is one fabulous story! ^-^

Although I don't really like Kurama cheating on Hiei... but, oh well, hey! They are getting marry! lol

Ya think I can attend their wedding? :D

Look! My new icon! It's Sora and Ran! They are having their wedding too! XP

thoth_moon February 8 2007, 16:58:14 UTC

Yeah ... but monogamy won out in the end, eh?

And "Saint" Hiei forgave the "harlot" Kurama for his unfaithfulness, and sought repentance for his "promiscuity" through the sanctified bounds of marriage XD Should make my Hiei-adoring Kurama-"hating" sister happy.

Of course you can attend--so long as you bring "sweet snow" (this appears to be a long fandom custom of unknown origins about Hiei having a thing for ice cream aka "sweet snow").

That photo is brilliant! Ah ... but Sora is the bride? I'd think it the other way for some reason *shrug* Maybe because Ran's hair is longer....

softy3140 February 9 2007, 16:30:32 UTC

(Wow, your comment is full of new words that I need my dictionary to accompany me! lol)

It's Sammi, right? Too bad she hates Kurama, let's force her to like him! XD

Oh ya! Let me bring my "minty snow" for him, how does that sound? :P

No,no,no! Ran IS the bride! Don't they just make a perfect match? :D (Ran acts more like a girl too! XP)

thoth_moon February 9 2007, 19:37:34 UTC

No ... Amanda "hates" Kurama. She's evil ^_^

Oh, okay--it's just, it looked like Sora was the one wearing the veil, so....

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