[fic] Fellows Will Fall in Line (ST: AOS)

[thistlerose]

Fellows Will Fall In Line

Fandom: Star Trek AOS
Ship: Joanna/Chekov
Rating: Adult (sex)
Summary: Inspired by this prompt at stxi_sinfest. She doesn't love going behind her dad's back. But that's kind of part of the thrill.
A/N: 1,200 words. This can be read as a one-shot or taken as a follow-up to Bloom and Grow.

Comments

[northatlantic]

What a perfect whiplash from heat to ache. I love Joanna/Chekov, and I love the humanity of this, that awkward tender what-the-hell-am-I-doing that characterizes real relationships as opposed to storybook ones.

[thistlerose]

Thank you! I started writing this with the idea that it would be straight-up smut, but it ended up going somewhere. I'm so glad it worked for you. :)

[linelenagain]

That was absolutely gorgeous - you've described exactly what it feels like to be young and in love, and you make us feel it too, for a moment. That's amazing. Thank you.

[thistlerose]

Thank you! :)

Ah, young love. I remember being her age, and kindasorta wanting my parents' disapproval without having to do anything really dangerous.

[secretsolitaire]

Mmm. Very sexy and real. I hope you'll keep writing in this verse.

[thistlerose]

Oh, thank you! :)

Mmm, I'd like to write more in this 'verse. Jim has a daughter too, after all.

[emluv]

Oh, that's just lovely. I particularly love Joanna's half-awareness of the earth just outside as she's pressed against the window. Wonderful imagery.

[thistlerose]

Joanna's just enough of an exhibitionist to get a thrill from that, but not enough to actually let anyone see her. *g*

Thank you!

[tosca1390]

Yesssss, I love this. I love them together, and how the parents' choices always haunt the kids, no matter what. Just lovely.

[thistlerose]

Thank you so much!