Comments | thistlerose: [fic] Fellows Will Fall in Line (ST: AOS)

thistlerose

[fic] Fellows Will Fall in Line (ST: AOS)

Mar 12, 2010 22:45

Fellows Will Fall In Line

Fandom: Star Trek AOS
Ship: Joanna/Chekov
Rating: Adult (sex)
Summary: Inspired by this prompt at stxi_sinfest. She doesn't love going behind her dad's back. But that's kind of part of the thrill.
A/N: 1,200 words. This can be read as a one-shot or taken as a follow-up to Bloom and Grow.

( There's nothing wrong with what they're doing. )

fic: 2010, fic: st aos: char.: joanna, fic: st aos (star trek)

Comments 24

leahthegreat March 13 2010, 18:24:46 UTC

Love this, such a beautiful look at their relationship.

thistlerose March 14 2010, 05:54:29 UTC

Thank you! :)

rubynye March 13 2010, 20:27:55 UTC

Short reply, in five minutes stolen from babysitting: oh, wonderful. Hot and tactile and lovely and oh, Joanna with the heartbreaking thoughts on ages at the end. *applauds*

thistlerose March 14 2010, 05:58:36 UTC

Thank you!! :)

I love writing about Joanna. She's bold and confused and loving and withdrawn all at the same time.

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thistlerose March 14 2010, 05:59:08 UTC

Thank you so much! For taking a chance on this story, and for the lovely comment. :)

igrockspock March 15 2010, 04:32:29 UTC

This is such a beautiful story. I admire the truth in her reactions -- half being scared and half enjoying her father's disapproval, her fears about being this age in a relationship, and her uncertainty about explaining them to anyone. It's so true that kissing is easier than talking about a problem!

thistlerose March 15 2010, 23:39:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I remember thinking something similar when I was her age, so I drew on that. I'm so glad her thoughts rang true for you.

danahid March 16 2010, 21:34:32 UTC

Lovely and complicated, in the best way...

thistlerose March 17 2010, 03:06:38 UTC

Thank you!