I like this so far. I think I've seen the first three sections you've posted in this chapter up before, but the two new ones are great. I really like the inner monologue going for Jo in the mirror-universe part. It really gives an insight for her. And Spock is totally heroic and wonderful.
Yeah, I'd posted earlier versions of the first three parts a while back. I'm so glad you like the new bits! And my Joanna voice. She's such fun to write. Thank you!
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She is lots of fun to write. Chip off the old iceberg.
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Where, she wondered desperately, was a hull breach or a freshly thawed-out twentieth century megalomaniac when you needed one?
Also, A+ use of Cupcake.
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Hee, Cupcake. I have such love for him, if only because he waited three whole years to use that line on Kirk.
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your joanna is so wonderful!
can't wait to read the rest :)
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