Comments | thistlerose: [fic] The Dangers of Improper Usage (Star Trek: Reboot)

thistlerose

[fic] The Dangers of Improper Usage (Star Trek: Reboot)

Jun 25, 2009 17:43

The Dangers of Improper Usage

Fandom: Star Trek: Reboot
Rating: all ages
Characters: Uhura, Kirk, McCoy, Sulu, and some guys with tentacles
Summary: The one where Uhura saves the day with grammar.
A/N: Written for the Where No Woman Has Drabbled Before challenge at where-no-woman. The prompt was "Uhura - fierce." 468 words.

( 'But Captain,' she said sweetly, 'wouldn't you like to know what you did incorrectly?' )

fic: 2009, fic: st aos (star trek), fic: st aos: char.: uhura, fic: st aos: char.: kirk

Comments 44

cranberry_crash June 26 2009, 02:59:07 UTC

Hee! Oh, the problems that are caused because people lie (and things lay)!

Sulu's right hand was bound with a strip of fabric that had obviously been torn from his gold tunic.

Those gold tunics just won't stay in one piece, no matter who's wearing them!

thistlerose June 26 2009, 03:27:41 UTC

Seriously! Get it right, people! Or you could end up semi-engaged to a tentacled alien princess! ^_^

I almost made it Jim's shirt that was torn, but decided that was too much.

Thank you!

evil_alter_ego June 26 2009, 03:31:19 UTC

Teeheee! Uhura is so awesome, this was very cool.

thistlerose June 26 2009, 04:14:26 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

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thistlerose June 26 2009, 04:14:00 UTC

Poor Kirk. That was not one of his better days. :)

Uhura pwns everyone and everything.

Thank you!!

shighola June 26 2009, 05:00:11 UTC

LOL Love Uhura saving kirk's ass!

thistlerose June 26 2009, 13:04:02 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

tree_and_leaf June 26 2009, 08:55:51 UTC

Yay! Go Uhura!

I love the bit about the eyebrow, too...

thistlerose June 26 2009, 13:04:50 UTC

Thank you! :)

She'll get it right sooner or later. Then she'll teach the rest of the bridge crew and they'll all do it simultaneously to Kirk and see what happens.