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[DBSK Drabble] kim jaejoong, god of mischief and mayhem

Jan 31, 2008 12:11

title: kim jaejoong, god of mischief and mayhem
characters/pairing: changmin/jaejoong
summary: where jaejoong has numerous tricks up his sleeves.
author's notes: for
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pairing: jaejoong/changmin, what: requestfic, type: drabble, fandom: dbsk

Comments 28

dbdbyeah January 31 2008, 04:21:08 UTC

oh look.. it's a ninja. hahah

ianinna January 31 2008, 04:44:34 UTC

the ninja went to lunch! :D

dbdbyeah January 31 2008, 15:10:38 UTC

and got back from lunch at 11:00 PM? O.O lmao.

unniiiiiieeee! i loved this! i seriously loved this so much. the last part made me giggle like a looney coz how you described them hugging was just... awwwww. and their bickering was too cute. <3

"feigning a headache, my ass."

i will say it again, the correct statement is:

"feigning a headache, junsu's ass."

puwahaha. *pokes* why'd you make chun see such a thing??? his eyes.. his poor eyes! *covers 'em*

ianinna February 1 2008, 02:51:51 UTC

junsu's ass! :DDDDD *holds* LMAO

chun deserved it. that perv. lol

jaemin cuddles are always love.

kallistei January 31 2008, 04:40:22 UTC

Jaejoong doesn't know he's already got Changmin; Changmin will never say it in so many words.

ianinna January 31 2008, 04:43:41 UTC

jaejoong raised his head and pouted at the other boy. "not fair. you never fall for anything." he punched changmin's arm.

the original lines after this part were:

changmin laughed louder. "oh, but i did. i've fallen a long time ago." he put on a pretend scowl and smacked jaejoong's shoulder.. xD

*hides*

kallistei January 31 2008, 04:46:02 UTC

I'm glad you left it out; the story's stronger without it, I think.

ianinna January 31 2008, 04:52:09 UTC

yeah. when i re-read this before i posted, i realized how trite and off it sounded, so i reworded it. :D

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ttaejoong_hyuk January 31 2008, 04:49:49 UTC

this was terribly cute!!!! AAAAHHH!!! jaejoong can't fool the overly mature changmin!!! wahahaha

ianinna January 31 2008, 04:53:22 UTC

thank you! ♥

and yes, jae can never outsmart min. :D

chloe1910 January 31 2008, 06:08:28 UTC

hahaha I like how it all ends....Jae can fool the world but he can never fool Min huh?...Min really know his Jae well...:D

chloe1910 January 31 2008, 06:13:02 UTC

Just wanna add....i think mischievous Jae is absolutely cute!!And I love smart ass Min!

ianinna January 31 2008, 08:21:38 UTC

i LOVE mischievous!jae and smart-ass!min, too! ♥

ianinna January 31 2008, 08:20:36 UTC

min is the master. *bows*

kurogoma January 31 2008, 06:40:20 UTC

see, jaejoong just need to resign himself to the fact that he will never be able to fool changmin.

and then again, the fun for jaemin is in all the trying he does.

i love reading fics where everyone is able to fool everyone else, but never min. he always manages to one-up everybody else each time.

♥♥♥

ianinna January 31 2008, 08:22:22 UTC

i'm beginning to think that changmin might have jedi powers. :D