2nd Attempt Rhyming Contest

[thismustbematty]

This may not have worked last time

Comments

[weather_vane]

Why the stuck-up filler
When I'd say it is for sure
The one whose poetry is killer
Will only show you the door?

[thismustbematty]

If you care to try
To test your rhymes
Please make some sense
To support your defense

[weather_vane]

The King of Rhymes is not a King
Au contraire, it is a Queen
For nobody but this rhyming
Vane of just fifteen
Can be the Rhyming King.

[thismustbematty]

Your style needs work,
Don't trip over your words
The sentences are murk
Fit to feed to the birds

Try something more quaint
Like a rhyming pattern
Rhyme words like a saint
And you'd need not concern

The title would be won
There could be no doubt
For the King or Queen'd have fun
While pushing their competition out

[_theo_nott_]

I'm shamed to find myself so late
and hope you'll grant me leave-
you'll find my efforts worth the wait
with words, a rhyme I'll weave.

To celebrate our gracious King
for granting us this chance
to give our thoughts a place to sing
our words, a space to dance

He's proven time and time again
to hold a mighty reign
With melody and poet's pen
his competition's slain

And by his side, I humbly sit
to honor and defend.
Come one, come all, and try your wit,
It's here you'll meet your end.

*~*Point Count*~*

[who_is_kyle]

1 to Ravenclaw
1 to Slytherin
1 to Gryffindor