Reaching for the Moon (part two) - ByaRen - PG

Jul 23, 2007 04:31

Pairing: Byakuya/Renji
Word Count: 2631
Rating: PG
Notes: Sequel to this. Still no plotless sex, damn the luck. I'll get there, okay?
Renji can't stand Byakuya's silence, and inadvertently forces the Captain into a realization that he isn't entirely comfortable with.
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns BLEACH, and I do not. Which is sad, because then I'd ( Read more... )

byakuya/renji, bleach

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materia_indigo July 23 2007, 11:55:20 UTC
Poor Renji! How's he going to focus on his paperwork? We're all looking forward to that, um, hour.

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iltb July 23 2007, 12:50:41 UTC
Renji better get some serious action for all this. *pets Renji*

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thisispurgatory July 23 2007, 17:06:32 UTC
Hahaha, seriously.

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*flails* evildrem July 23 2007, 14:02:27 UTC

Renji isn't the only one who can't wait for his hour with Byakuya..
More soon? *looks pathetic*

Again, I loved this bit in particular:
"He looked at the ground, inadequately, and said, "I'm sorry, Taichou."

Byakuya considered this, and told him, "No, you aren't."

Renji looked up, about to protest this, but at the look on Byakuya's face, he decided against it."

I can *hear* that interaction between them and I can see what expression Renji would have on his face and the same with Byakuya. Lovely visual :)

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thisispurgatory July 23 2007, 17:10:50 UTC
This fic got such a good response that I'm almost glad it was so hard to get them into bed right off the bat *dies*

Ah, I'm glad you enjoyed that part! There's a level of petty arguing I like to address with them. Byakuya is above arguing, but Renji pushes his buttons a little too hard and he says snotty things to him in return. I enjoy this too much, I think.

I'll do more as soon as I can! ♥

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chloevien July 23 2007, 16:23:14 UTC
Hope that Renji use his hour with Byakuya carefully, not talking and arguing all the time, otherwise Byakuya should use his Shunpo to *cough* do *cough Renji.
Geez..... my horny brain *lol*
Lots of love for you, and please don't make us wait too long, we all are waiting for their precious one hour 'meeting':)
xxx
Chloevien

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thisispurgatory July 23 2007, 23:48:05 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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