Reaching for the Moon (part two) - ByaRen - PG

[thisispurgatory]

Pairing: Byakuya/Renji
Word Count: 2631
Rating: PG
Notes: Sequel to this. Still no plotless sex, damn the luck. I'll get there, okay?
Renji can't stand Byakuya's silence, and inadvertently forces the Captain into a realization that he isn't entirely comfortable with.
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns BLEACH, and I do not. Which is sad, because then I'd

Comments

[gogo_ergo_sum]

It is hard to get them in bed immediately (I know it all too well), but...it's SO much more worth it when they finally do. This is great! I love how Bya keeps the control and Renji keeps nudging and picking and prodding. Great characterization. Looking forward to the next. xoxo

[inuphoenixgate]

Great fic! I love how you do not make it too easy for Renji because Byakuya is such a tight wad and must be in control - nice in-characterizations for both. Looking forward to the next one...and for the smex that is well worth the wait.

[thisispurgatory]

Thanks! I wanted it to be easier, but you know, Byakuya being difficult is pretty fun, as well.

NEXT INSTALLMENT, HOPEFULLY, WILL WORK BETTER. And then Bya-chan will angst for awhile, I'm sure. Sigh.

Glad you like! ♥

[yaoi_4dd1ct]

OOh! I love how this chapter ends, wonderment! So wonderful! One hour of my time. . . how I look forward to this one hour! :) Luvs this fic.

[thisispurgatory]

Hahaha, you're like the fourth or fifth person to tell me they're looking forward to this hour. I hope I can live up to everyone's expectations, here. ^^;;;

Glad you enjoyed it!

[artemisms]

I'm sure the sex will be nice, but I have to say, what I'm in love with her is your incredible build-up! You have Bya's and Renji's characters DOWN, girl! I love how you write them. It's practically canon!!! Can't wait for the next part, and not just for the sex!

[thisispurgatory]

THANK YOU NEW BEST FRIEND.

"Practically canon" just made me grin like a madwoman, so thank you! I'm really flattered. ^^;

I thought Renji would be hard to write, but it's kind of just....flowing. They're acting a little differently in the third part, but you'll see why.

Third part up soon, I promise! ♥

[artemisms]

If you had difficulties with Renji, it didn't show. You are really an excellent writer ^^ *happy to be your new best friend* :P

[thisispurgatory]

^^;;
Thanks so much! *snug*

[views]

taichou is always so cold, I feel sorry for Renji ;u;

anyway, I'm looking forward to the hour ♥

[thisispurgatory]

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.