D.Gray-man Fic: Tiki/Allen, NC-17

[thisispurgatory]

Pairing: Tiki/Allen. No I will not spell it "Tyki".
Word count: 4135
Rating: NC-17
Warning: HOLY SHIT, THIS IS FUCKED UP. Reaching into bodies, slight guro, and character near-death. I'd feel like a worse person, but the manga just totally set the scene for this. It was begging to happen.
Notes: This takes place about chapter 56 in the manga? Or

Comments

[haverstock]

ohgodithinkiloveyou

♥

[haverstock]

... *jealous of your mad hawt writing skillz* You got them perfectly in-character as well! Well, almost. Little bit OOC on Allen's part -- but the naiveness can be explained away by shock. The begging was maybe pushing it a bit though since Allen is nothing if not stubborn-as-hell~ :P

You should write more for the Poker Pair Revolution! It is still in the planning stages though, as I seem to have more ideas in my head than my fingers will allow me to type :\ -- but the fanart hunting has been going well, at least ;D

ALSO: THANK-YOU. I recieved it from a friend as a gift for coining the pairing name. It is my trophy. My baby. My most favoured icon. I flaunt it and pray that it hasn't been stolen and handed out in some obscure corner of the fandom. *is a retard*

You obviously are a Tyki/Allen fan. Hopefully. Might I be able to friend you?

[calaris]

woah really intense and nice story. I especially liked the beginning, where you started off with the scene in the manga, then you managed to perfectly change that into this... ehem... scene *hems* I liked the description also.

I think Tikky is very in character and also Allen. Awesome story, really.

The only thing that I noticed was, that in the end, where Allen 'died' - it would have been better if you would have described it as intensely as the emotions from the beginning.

hope to be able to read more from you in the future ^.^

[kaenguma]

beautifully written and totally in character! much love for this story <3

love especially how you write Tiki ^^
I hope there's more?

[sinistersundown]

H-hot and traumatizing and made of win. You write a beautiful Tyki.

And I want to lick your icon (the tyki+rabi blood one). > >;

[lelischan]

love for your Icon *_*
and love for your story *___________*
and much moooore love for this paring! yay!!! *___*

your tiky is great ! it's so totally in-character!!!