Comments | thisismylastlie: (kaisoo drabble)

thisismylastlie

(kaisoo drabble)

Aug 06, 2012 01:37

perfect is your defect || kindof!kaisoo (jongin/kyungsoo). [pg.] ~340w.

( while the rest of the world sees kai, breathing perfection, kyungsoo sees jongin, a little boy shoved into the spotlight. )

fandom: exo, genre: angst, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, length: drabble

Comments 13

re_lla August 6 2012, 09:34:35 UTC

; ; i feel this is so ... REAL
there is jongin and there is kai ...
jongin ah .. you need to see more closer and more clearly to know that what kyungsoo did for you ... aren't only as umma's duty
kyungsoo ... ; ; let me hug you tight ..

thank you ; v ; this '~340 words' blowing my mind away !

thisismylastlie August 7 2012, 03:22:50 UTC

Aww, thank you so much for reading :) I'm glad you liked it.

swabluu August 6 2012, 19:28:28 UTC

<3
<3
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thisismylastlie August 7 2012, 03:22:36 UTC

♥
thanks for reading~ ^^

apieceofsilver August 7 2012, 12:20:51 UTC

"Perfect is your defect."

Urgh! I love that one-liner!
^^

thisismylastlie August 7 2012, 18:01:51 UTC

aww, thank you :)
and thanks for reading! ♥

bowlerhatter August 7 2012, 16:04:10 UTC

d'aaawww
kyungsoo sees jongin, a little boy shoved into the spotlight.
DDx
well, this is angst but it feels just fine. i mean, the way you put the ending is purfect bcs umma is umma, and his little boy is just clueless..

thisismylastlie August 7 2012, 18:02:35 UTC

yeah, that's why I wasn't sure if it was angst LOL it wasn't very sad, in my opinion. or angsty xD
but thank you :D
♥

omegadon August 11 2012, 17:08:58 UTC

the very first line pulled me in. i swear to lord that's like, a beautiful sentence. but not just because of the use of words but because it tells a little story.

but while the world sees kai, the epitome of perfection in everything he does, kyungsoo sees jongin, a little boy shoved into the spotlight.
funny. that's how i see jongin too. he's all about charisma on stage, oozing sex and all...but when you see between the lines he's just a tired little kid and you feel almost bad for him.

and jongin is just a little boy, and little boys do as they are told.
perfect! that's like...life...shoved into one sentence! a child, living in constraints, doing what he's told. ugh! i feel you kai.

but at the end of the day, jongin is the one who comes home to kyungsoo, a weak smile on his face as he curls up on the couch beside kyungsoo and they watch stupid dramas until they fall asleep.
correction. they watch PORORO! pororo. yes.

kyungsoo loves jongin, there's no denying it. he pulls the blanket around the boy in the cold, gives up half of ( ... )