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melfice December 22 2011, 08:35:06 UTC
I don't even really have words - which is exactly what I want a fic to do to me - but this is outstanding. Your descriptions are so perfect, without being too much; I get a real sense of where they are, of what is happening, without losing attention. I love your characterizations and I love that everyone is who they are, without any real fandom bias or favoritism.

Honestly, I don't even know. I'm mostly flailing like crazy over here because this is perfect and, really, thank you so much for taking the time to write and share this.

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thirstyrobot December 22 2011, 22:38:25 UTC
Oh, wow, thank you so much for the lovely comment! <3 I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it and everything worked for you! :D

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still_glorious December 22 2011, 09:29:11 UTC
Absolutely loved this. So well done, so well written. you nailed the characters and the situation brilliantly. Really love the details of the surroundings. Great, no, fabulous job!

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thirstyrobot December 22 2011, 22:45:47 UTC
Thank you so much! Especially glad to hear you mention the surrounding details because that was a big part of what made this exist. :)

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maldeluxx December 22 2011, 11:03:53 UTC
This feels so real and you can almost sense the sun and the dirt and everything. Very lovely :)

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thirstyrobot December 22 2011, 22:46:12 UTC
This is so great to hear, thank you!

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sandrine December 22 2011, 11:21:29 UTC
Everything about this story is perfect: the character voices, the narration, the way they awkwardly and uncertainly slip into a relationship, the squirrel, the ending - every-fucking-thing! I just want to re-read it over and over again. ♥♥♥

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thirstyrobot December 22 2011, 22:56:44 UTC
Thank you so much! Re-reading makes me happy, hee. <3333 I hope you enjoy it next time too!

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la_reverenda December 22 2011, 13:38:33 UTC
SQUIRREL LOVE. I'm so glad this got shared with the world in general. <33

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thirstyrobot December 22 2011, 22:58:50 UTC
Squirrel love indeed. XD I'm so glad that you punch me in the arm. <3333

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