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Richard Siken- The Dislocated Room
Sep 17, 2009 19:53
I've been in your body baby and it was paradise
I've been in your body and it was a carnival ride.
richard siken
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indianoceans
September 17 2009, 21:09:42 UTC
siken siken siken.
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weirdity
September 17 2009, 22:55:45 UTC
i like siken, i've got crush....but this is awfully short for a poem, and its a sentiment he's expressed in other (longer) poems.
it has its own validity as a poem, i have no doubt. but i guess it doesn't do it for me because he did it before, and better.
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indianoceans
September 18 2009, 00:13:52 UTC
http://indianareview.org/content/issue211/211poetry1.html
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redcliches
September 18 2009, 03:30:20 UTC
Why wasn't the whole poem posted, I wonder.
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weirdity
September 18 2009, 16:33:05 UTC
haha, well there you go. :)
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unionsongs
September 18 2009, 00:12:43 UTC
ohh, i do like richard siken.
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extria
September 18 2009, 01:43:32 UTC
Love this ♥
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shechoselove
September 18 2009, 04:47:11 UTC
Yeah, I'm not seeing it.
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it has its own validity as a poem, i have no doubt. but i guess it doesn't do it for me because he did it before, and better.
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