Richard Siken- The Dislocated Room

[peachplumhoney]

I've been in your body baby and it was paradise
I've been in your body and it was a carnival ride.

Comments

[moldypotatochip]

Sounds like a dime-a-dozen song lyric.

[greentea_fairy]

I think it works better in the entire poem, not just these two lines.

[paperhouse]

yes, if you're going to post a fragment, call it a fragment and link it to the whole piece, please.