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Richard Siken- The Dislocated Room
Sep 17, 2009 19:53
I've been in your body baby and it was paradise
I've been in your body and it was a carnival ride.
richard siken
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moldypotatochip
September 18 2009, 12:21:16 UTC
Sounds like a dime-a-dozen song lyric.
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greentea_fairy
September 18 2009, 16:32:02 UTC
I think it works better in the entire poem, not just these two lines.
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paperhouse
September 18 2009, 19:43:47 UTC
yes, if you're going to post a fragment, call it a fragment and link it to the whole piece, please.
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