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Day 3 Prompt: Made of Sugar and Sin and Sweet

Dec 10, 2007 14:14

Title: Made of Sugar and Sin and Sweet
Author: Rose Ganymede
Pairings/Characters: Nathan/Peter
Rating: PG-13
Category: Petrellicest
Word Count: 3227
Spoilers: nope
Summary: Some things you wish for, and some things you plan; some things you would never even dream, and some things just have a way of happening. Peter's 13th birthday, and Peter's ( Read more... )

author: roseganymede, day 3

Comments 14

heidi8 December 10 2007, 19:32:41 UTC

Your writing is just lyrical and stunning. This was terrific!

ex_rosegany December 10 2007, 20:26:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it's non-canonical ;)

drunkncozb December 10 2007, 20:09:37 UTC

Maybe this is everything.
Oh yes yes yes! This line in particular was amazing, but the whole thing was just stunning! I love your style, it's kind of impressionistic. I get a picture in my head of what's happening, but it's less made of visuals than of emotions, and taste, and touch. The mood it paints is palpable.

ex_rosegany December 10 2007, 20:28:05 UTC

*blush*

That's such a great compliment, thank you! If that's how my writing reads, that's wonderful by me :) The boys are such a whirlwind of emotions and their lives are all over the place, it just kind of happens this way...

So glad you liked it <3

eryslash December 10 2007, 20:32:42 UTC

I LOVE YOU. This is so perverted and sweet I can't help but love it to pieces. Some details are just...right. Guh. (Yeah that has become my standard comment on your fics, lol.)

ex_rosegany December 11 2007, 01:19:08 UTC

Hee! Love you too ;)

perverted and sweet

Who ever would've thought those could go together? Heh. But that's what I was going for - there's certainly a wrongness to it, and potential for so much conflict later, but in the moment it's just pure love. Pure, Petrelli love <3

Eee, so glad you enjoyed it! I'll make you a "guh" icon you can just post with ;)

eryslash December 11 2007, 20:38:01 UTC

Ah, I would love to use that, eeeh!:D

fabrisse December 10 2007, 20:42:35 UTC

Sugar and sin really does seem to sum up Peter.

I found the not-quite innocence of this very erotic.

Please can I read New Year's Eve? *bounces*

ex_rosegany December 11 2007, 01:21:16 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Sugar and sin definitely = Peter, glad you agree. And it makes for a delicious combination, as I'm sure Nathan can attest - the not-quite-innocence of this had me a wee bit worried about people's reactions for some reason, tame as it is, probably because, yeah...It's totally erotic for me too ;)

I think I am going to try to write a New Year's Eve sequel in time for...New Year's! My Peter muse and I will have to cook something particularly devious up...

kelly_girl December 10 2007, 20:51:31 UTC

Wow. Wonderful story, full of longing not just on Peter's part but Nathan's too. Love that you addressed the temptation and wrongness of wanting something you know you shouldn't. Will definitely be reading this again.

ex_rosegany December 11 2007, 01:23:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this; I really appreciate the comments :)

There's definitely something to be said about longing for something you know you shouldn't have, but yet it's everything right as much as it's wrong. Kind of bittersweet, and that sort of love/hate thing we see with Peter and Nathan in the show (not hate, but tension, I guess) makes me think it could start somewhere like this...

Thanks again <3