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smithy161 in thewordsmithery

Fic: Good Morning, Jack

Nov 15, 2007 01:54

Written quick-n-dirty for fandom_me. I've read over it, but it's not been edited at all.

Title: Good Morning, Jack
Pairing: Ten/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sequel to Surrender, but works perfectly well on its own. Jack and the Doctor need to talk, but there are other, more important things to do first.
Length: 1,218 words
Written for: fandom_me who seems to need ( Read more... )

adult, doctor/jack, doctor who, ten/jack

Comments 63

fandom_me November 15 2007, 02:03:38 UTC

This is *awesome*. Oh my goodness, you have made my day. It made me grina nd bounce and it's hot and it's THEM.

And I like Rule one. I like Rule one a LOT.

smithy161 November 15 2007, 02:06:43 UTC

And! *points* sub!Doctor. That's new. I think. For me.

Glad you like it. Very glad. No coherence left, though, time for sleep!

(Yay for Rule One)

fandom_me November 15 2007, 02:07:48 UTC

IT IS and you did it SO SO SO WELL! (New for me too, but god it's hot.)

Sleep well! and thank you again!

smithy161 November 15 2007, 10:23:02 UTC

I think I like sub!Ten. Doesn't really work for Nine, but Ten could take it without wounding his manly pride.

Or something.

Need MORE sleep.

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sistercarrion November 15 2007, 02:27:28 UTC

Love it.. just the tone, everything :)

smithy161 November 15 2007, 10:02:39 UTC

Thank you!

ausmac November 15 2007, 02:37:12 UTC

OK, that was just...aaargh! You do it to me every time. Too, too good. I love it when a writer loves the characters as much as I do, and creates that rapport in her words. Salute!

smithy161 November 15 2007, 10:11:07 UTC

Whee, awesome. Thank you. And you noticed I love these characters? What on Earth gave that away!

(Also, I always want to open your icon up and let the kitten out. Is that weird?)

_medley_ November 15 2007, 02:37:59 UTC

Love this. And I heartily approve of Rule One. And of putting off Rules Two and Three for a bit.

smithy161 November 15 2007, 10:11:55 UTC

Yay! Thank you. And Two and Three can wait. They'll be boring anyway.

nightrider101 November 15 2007, 02:38:02 UTC

Aww... A beautifully written scene between Jack and Ten. :) The idea of those two gorgeous men together is just too lovely for for words. I like the idea of the rules too. It splashed some angst on the story which always seems to pop up with this pair. It *would* be complicated. I prefer to live in denial. lol Great writing!

smithy161 November 15 2007, 10:13:16 UTC

My In Character sense wouldn't let me go without at least alluding to the angst. But yay, thank you for reading!